Talk:Eve (Stellar Blade)

Errors in grammar or spelling
The article seemingly contains some errors that someone with editing privileges should correct. They are as follows:
 * In the first sentence of the paragraph right before the start of the "In regards to sex appeal" section, the phrase "the Eve" is used (Josh Cotts and Game Rant meanwhile praised how Eve's personality was developed by several of the in-game mechanics, particularly through the Eve's own rejection of side quests that may be offered to the player); this would be better with just "Eve".
 * In the first paragraph of the "In regards to sex appeal" section, there is this statement: He further felt that it gave the implication just "want her from the neck down. It seems to be very much a statement of the parts of this woman that are of value." For this sentence to be correct, a subject who "wants her from the neck down" needs to be mentioned. The source uses "you", but the article should use something like "the developers" or something else, as using second person pronouns in Wikipedia is discouraged.
 * The second paragraph of the same section has a quote that needs tweaking: they were not uncommon mentalities for developers of characters such as Bayonetta or Lollipop Chainsaw's Juliet Starling, female characters who are "empowered, and clearly attractive, female hero who owns that part of who they are" and find strength in their sexuality. The issue here is that hero is singular, but should be plural. This can be solved by replacing with [heroes] or hero[es], but then owns should instead be own.

Those are all the issues I found. If others agree that these are errors, then they should be corrected. Thank you in advance, and have a nice day! 90.133.232.139 (talk) 13:26, 4 July 2024 (UTC)


 * ✅ NatwonTSG2 (talk) 15:34, 4 July 2024 (UTC)