Talk:Eve (Stellar Blade)/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 01:08, 5 May 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 03:28, 5 May 2024 (UTC)

I'll be reviewing this article since it's smaller than I expected.Tintor2 (talk) 03:28, 5 May 2024 (UTC)

Everything looks good. I checked all the references and they seem reliable. While the infobox image looks good I suggest replacing the one from the reception in favor of sketches or a college of designs she can wear similar to how you wrote Tifa's article. I'm not sure if a future DYK nomination will be glad with that image if you consider making it. Good work with this article. It was made quiet quickly and I'll be glad to pass it once you believe everything is okay.Tintor2 (talk) 04:29, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Lead
 * Main protagonist sounds kinda redundant.
 * Fixed
 * Does she have little personality like a stoic person or the criticism finds her cold the developers wanted?
 * Clarified
 * Appearances
 * I suggest splitting the part of the alternative endings into another paragraph considering the amount of content it discusses.
 * Done
 * Reception
 * "Automaton's Taijiro Yamanaka" since it's the first writer I suggest adding "Automaton writer Taijiro Yamanaka".
 * Fixed
 * I would consider toning down a bit the quotes
 * Removed a few quote marks where the statements themselves sufficed
 * Maybe the Skin Suit could be illustrated if it is recognized by other critics too rather a gif.
 * I want to leave this because the Skin Suit's already shown in the GIF, but a big part of her discussion were her animations and regard for her own sex appeal, and that pose was specifically brought up to illustrate she had some agency regarding it in Henley's view.


 * I think I got everything, let me know if there's anything else!--Kung Fu Man (talk) 15:10, 5 May 2024 (UTC)