Talk:Events and festivals in Pristina

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Dear colleague DSpahija,

I wanted to let you know that DAM Fest, as you referred to it - originally "DAM Festival" was not first held in 1996 but in 2006. This information is reliable since my group members and I are writing an article in detail with that topic.

Best regards! Vivelyre (talk) 19:36, 23 February 2014 (UTC)

Tone of article
Who's we that you referring to? Encyclopedia is impersonal. Avoid writing like a guide book which is noticeable in the first two sections. The other sections have the right tone. Make sure you have photos for every second one perhaps and link to existing Wikipedia articles of those festivals. Keep up the good work! --Arianit (talk) 07:06, 26 February 2014 (UTC)

Clear Sentences
I think you need to make some sentences clear and check any grammar errors or the structure of wording. For instance, this sentence: One of "the very few things that they enjoy properly, without rushing to get it over withRinalila (talk) 00:32, 2 March 2014 (UTC) are festivals and cultural events." is not very clear.

External links modified
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Cheers.—cyberbot II  Talk to my owner :Online 17:19, 26 February 2016 (UTC)

Grammar, Manual of Style, and Neutrality Revision
Updated article with grammar corrections, per to WP:MOS, removed all instances where the tone is written like an advertisement, removed three sections:one in a foreign language (I mean really?), and two that didn't seem very important at all. I therefore have removed the neutrality and advertisement templates however left the source one.  IWI  ( chat ) 23:39, 6 July 2018 (UTC)