Talk:Everett Strupper/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MrWooHoo (talk · contribs) 18:23, 14 May 2016 (UTC)

I'll start this review ASAP. Just before we begin, to sort out confusion, I will have a general review then an in depth prose and source review. In the general review, I'll use the "GA tools" box. Cheers! MrWooHoo (talk) 18:20, 14 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Only one issue I can find here. Great job with this article! Putting on hold.
 * Went ahead and fixed it. Sorry for the delay, I'm passing now. MrWooHoo (talk) 01:00, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

General Review

 * "Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -  between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 25 yards, use 25 yards, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 25 yards."
 * I see one example of this, the "148 pounds".

Prose Review
Note: If you have changed the sentence that needed to be corrected, press Enter and start off the line with, then use ✅ or ✅ If the change was only partially done use, and or ❌ if the change could not occur. (If you would explain why, I would be greatly appreciated :P) To see code, go to edit source and copy the code.


 * As mentioned above, correct the " problem.