Talk:Evidence (Faith No More song)/GA1

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:49, 4 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's it. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:06, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Per all the other similar reviews, "replaced their previous guitar player Jim Martin and were dealing with the absence of keyboard player Roddy Bottum" explain.
 * "and R&B influenced" link R&B, and should be and "soul- and R&B-influenced"
 * "and accompanied" was.
 * "Although it did not" Although the single/track did not...
 * "who had been fired from the band" why
 * "producer Andy Wallace. Wallace had" repetitive.
 * "friend of Bottom's.[1][4] " typo.
 * "Stern, and recorded" which was?
 * "The band made an appearance the previous" had made.
 * "UK singles chart" link it.
 * Refs 9 and 11 could use en-dash, proper clear up too, extracting the publisher from the title.


 * Thanks again for the review! I think this should cover everything but as always let me know if I've missed anything. 𝄠ʀᴀᴘᴘʟᴇ● 19:20, 4 September 2021 (UTC)