Talk:Ex (Elvana Gjata, DJ Gimi-O and Bardhi song)/GA1

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:10, 28 April 2022 (UTC)

This looks to be a well-researched article! --K. Peake 09:10, 28 April 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * Either write DJ after German-Albanian disc jockey or use a different introduction, as elsewise the full stage name is not mentioned
 * "and was produced by the" → "with production from the"
 * "Musically, it is an uptempo Balkan and Mediterranean-influenced Albanian pop love song, with its Albanian-language lyrics reflecting" → "An uptempo Balkan and Mediterranean-influenced Albanian pop love song, its Albanian-language lyrics reflect" with the wikilink per MOS:LINK2SECT
 * Change the first sentence of the second para to something like "Several music critics complimented the composition of "Ex" and the music video."
 * "a colorful music video" → "an accompanying colorful music video"
 * Remove the term official since that is not needed for the lead

Background and release

 * Retitle to Background and composition, merging with the first para of the below section
 * Pipe Bardhi to Bardhi (rapper)
 * Wikilink Elvana Gjata
 * You should instead write that Elvana Gjata announced her first collaboration with those other artists because only her Insta is in the source
 * "depicts the muppet character" → "depicted the muppet character"

Music and lyrics

 * Add info about the vocals/lyrics to the audio sample text
 * The first para should be merged with the above section per it being too short for its own one
 * "along with Gimi-O" → "along with DJ Gimi-O" per this not being the disc jockey's real name
 * "It is an" → "Musically, "Ex" is an"
 * "a Middle Eastern beat." → "a Middle Eastern-styled beat."
 * "pain, and rejection," → "pain and rejection,"
 * "In a review of Illyrian Pirates, the author" → "In a review for Illyrian Pirates, an author"
 * Remove the lyrics include part from the end of the last para

Reception

 * Create this section with the reviews and commercial reception in two separate paras

Music video

 * Wikilink music video
 * Add the release years of the two previous singles
 * "garnered 10 million YouTube views in two weeks." → "garnered 10 million views in two weeks on the platform." plus the YouTube stats should come after the critics' comments
 * "The latter further confessed that" → "They further confessed that"
 * Write Gazette Metro instead
 * "on the Swiss singles chart" → "on the Swiss Singles Chart" with the pipe
 * "and listed "Ex" at number 20 for" → "on which "Ex" reached number 20 for"

Credits and personnel

 * Where is the YouTube source here?

Track listing

 * Remove this section because it is a one-track release and you've written out the length in prose

Charts

 * For the Billboard chart, cite Switzerland Songs and then Billboard in brackets

Release history

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 10:24, 28 April 2022 (UTC)
 * Hello nice to hear from you again. I fixed all the issues above. Iaof2017 (talk) 14:08, 28 April 2022 (UTC)
 * Nice job there, but you still need to remove the lyrics part from the last para of comp and cite YouTube in the via parameter of refs. --K. Peake 08:09, 29 April 2022 (UTC)
 * Sorry for the delay, I've already fixed the comment with the YouTube parameter. Iaof2017 (talk) 13:16, 30 April 2022 (UTC)
 * It appears elsewise actually, as it is currently cited in the publisher parameter. --K. Peake 18:41, 30 April 2022 (UTC)
 * Hey, I'm not sure what you mean by that cause I've already cited YouTube in the parameter of ref [11] ([6]) and [17] ([10]). :O Iaof2017 (talk) 19:54, 1 May 2022 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I got it now, my bad! ^^ Iaof2017 (talk) 20:04, 1 May 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, glad you understood my point in the end! --K. Peake 20:48, 1 May 2022 (UTC)