Talk:Exchange Hotel, Montgomery

Organization
This article, while interesting, jumps around from topic to topic and back and forth in time. It really could use a more chronological development (the sentence mentioning its demolition isn't even in the section titled "Reputation and demise"). The sentence "When the first State Capitol burned down, on December 14, 1849, the legislature was in session in the Exchange" is confusing: was the legislature already in the hotel when the capitol burned (as the sentence suggests) or should the text start with "After", with the predicate possibly "moved its sessions to"? I'd make some of these changes, but don't know the facts. Piledhigheranddeeper (talk) 17:55, 26 November 2022 (UTC)