Talk:Excubitors/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:21, 26 December 2020 (UTC)

I'll do this one shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:21, 26 December 2020 (UTC)
 * No DABs
 * Images properly licensed
 * Close proximity alert for participated in the later period section.
 * I should have been more specific. I meant that "participated" is used too closely together in In the expedition against the Emirate of Crete in 949, the regiment participated with over 700 men.[36] In 958, the Excubitors participated in the repulsion of a Magyar raid.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:11, 17 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Hah, I missed that, I thought that referred to a repetition further down. Fixed now. Constantine  ✍  07:57, 18 January 2021 (UTC)
 * I'd suggest deleting the refs column and moving the citations into the Notes where they can follow the text like normal.
 * Title case in Whitby
 * Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:23, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Hi Sturmvogel 66, your comments have been addressed. Anything else? Cheers, Constantine  ✍  11:46, 17 January 2021 (UTC)