Talk:Excuses for Bad Behavior Part 2

I've been working hard on this, and I hope it looks alright. Please tell me what else I can do. -Acoustica 00:04, 11 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Unfortunately you've made a real mess of the page, and I don't think you have a real understanding of Wikipedia or the rules. You make a lot of statements that aren't factual and seem to be your personal opinions, and then you've posted links as citations to back up the statements, but the links don't have anything to do with the statements. Just as an example, you stated that this album was commercially and critically more successful than its predecessor; you then followed that with a citation that linked back to nothing more than a mirrored older version of this very Wiki-article on Bernhard. In point of fact "Excuses...Part Two" has received absolutely no critical note whatsoever, having not even been released on an actual record label but instead exclusively sold as burned CD-R's at Bernhard's shows and on her own website. Also, fan opinions and comments on message boards etc... are not notable. Midnightguinea 23:50, 15 December 2006 (UTC)
 * You can't make a comment like "The LGBT community approved of the album and show"; that would suggest that all gay, lesbian, bisexual and transgendered people globally endorsed the album, and that's just ludicrous. You can cite specific journalists who enjoyed the show, and you can mention content within the show which would make it appeal to gay people, but you can't make a sweeping generalization like this. Midnightguinea 23:51, 15 December 2006 (UTC)

Anna Farris
After further reviewing this article and reading some of the references, I'm REALLY confused as to what the hell the former editor was doing. You state that Anna Farris is a friend of Bernhard's and that she contributed to this album, specifically to the track "Making Out With Britney Spears." I popped the album in to re-listen because I didn't remember this, and the track in question is a spoken word track that features ONLY Bernhard; Farris is nowhere to be found. The reference link you gave to back this assertion up went to a magazine interview BY Bernhard OF Farris; the article did not assert they are friends nor did it assert Farris appears on this album. You then also stated that "Some of Bernhard's fans did not like Farris' contribution" and then linked to someone's blog where they mentioned they were listening to their album collection alphabetically, and that Bernhard's OTHER album "Excuses for Bad Behaviour (Part One)" was on that list. It had NOTHING to do with your statement. I am now going to go through this entire article and check ALL of your references, because I don't believe ANY of them are going to end up being relevant at all!!! Midnightguinea 14:03, 22 January 2007 (UTC)