Talk:Expo MRT station/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:35, 17 May 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's it, on hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 15:25, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "the Changi Airport branch" link airport first time.
 * "Changi Airport station" station should be part of the link so it's not confused with the airport itself.
 * "than the Changi Airport station" no need for "the".
 * "airport's Terminal 5 by 2040.[3][4]" why only reference that  in the lead?  All material in lead should be in article and expanded upon, and can be referenced there.
 * "will be incorporated as part of the" do you mean "incorporated into the"?
 * "The two-station branch, which included Expo station, was finalised" was it finalised or was it agreed that it'd  be built?
 * "announcement by then Deputy" then is not required,  it's obvious this is a contemporary  discussion.
 * "President's Challenge 2001" what is this?
 * I assume that walk was before the station opened, but it's not clear.
 * "of the Changi Airport station" again, no  "the", check others.
 * "Changi Airport Branch" section heading, is this actually a formal name, or should it be "Changi Airport branch"?
 * "Installation of the half-height" no "the".
 * ""and was one of the last stations on the EWL to have PSDs installed on" full height? To replace those half-height ones?
 * "where the DTL will interchange" would.
 * "the overrun tunnels" what are those?
 * "S$211.4 million (US$168 million) in M" currencies are linked second time round.
 * "construction of Stage 3 of the DTL with" --> "construction of DTL3 with"
 * "the Downtown line 3 Expo station" do you need "the Downtown line 3" here?
 * "the DTL station" again, is DTL needed?
 * "It was followed" This was followed?
 * "will be opened" would be opened.
 * "other Downtown Line 3 stations" DTL3.
 * "DTL3 extension (DTL3e). The DTL3e "merge to avoid repetition.
 * "by British architectural"" no need to link British.
 * "The spacious interior of the station" guidebook
 * "which complement the futuristic design of the station." ditto.
 * In fact, this whole bit needs a copyedit to bring  it back to encyclopedic tone.
 * "signify not only the importance of organic communication" same.
 * Refs 29, 31, 32 etc etc, spaced hyphens should be en-dashes.
 * "extends to Sungei Bedok in 2024, the next station will be Xilin station. [45]" both overlinked and no space before ref.
 * Addressed the issues raised. Overrun tunnels generally mean the tunnels that extends beyond the terminating station. I cant really find a Wikipedia article on this. And it is only half height platform doors and not full height. Design section has also been copyedited.--ZKang123 (talk) 02:29, 21 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Okay, promoting. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 07:40, 23 May 2021 (UTC)