Talk:Expressionist architecture/Archive 1


 * Structure redesign sandbox

Archpedia
Cut and paste as some source from Archpedia:-

''Expressionism was a style in the Western arts which straddled the latter half of the 19th century and the first half of the 20th. Until the 19th century, the arts had been principally concerned with the depiction of reality, and artists used emotion--their own or their subject's--as one component of expression and not its guarantor. Expressionist art, by contrast, dealt directly with the transmission of emotion. It was subjective and incoherent rather than objective and precise. The urge towards the overt expression of feeling began with the Romantic movement at the end of the 18th century, but true expressionism was only liberated a century later, when Freud's work made complexes, neuroses and private obsessions acceptable subjects for polite study and for the arts.''

''In architecture, expressionism was identified with the works of architects in Germany, Holland and Scandinavia from the end of World War I until the 1920s. The expressionist buildings are characterized by unusual angular or organic forms and internal volumes, to some extent made possible by the imaginative use of reinforced concrete. The historian Pevsner saw the style as a deviation from the development of the Modernist movement, working under the influence of Art Nouveau in the political crisis following World War I. The prewar work most closely identified with expressionism is probably that of Peter Behrens (1868 - 1940), particularly his factories for A.E.G. in Berlin (1908-1913), and certainly the postwar work of Bauhaus, during the Weimar period, is felt to have absorbed the principal features of expressionism, visually the stark expressive simplicity and theoretically a sense of architecture's ethical obligation, as a tool for raising social standards. The best-known examples of postwar expressionist architecture are the Chilehaus in Hamburg of 1923, the work of, Fritz Hoeger (1877 - 1949) and the interior of the Grosses Schauspielhaus in Berlin of 1919 by , Hans Poelzig (1869 - 1936). Perhaps one of the most striking of all buildings in the expressionist idiom was an early work of, Erich Mendelson (1887 - 1953), the 'Einstenurm', an observatory tower, built at Potsdam in 1920, an organic form with a motif of streamlining which was to become so important in Western industrial design.''

--Mcginnly 12:50, 11 May 2006 (UTC)

Thoughts for inclusion

 * We're gonna need to research The Der Sturm group. Taut was a founding member - also a magazine.
 * The First world war had a bearing on all the early C20 movements - idealism etc.
 * Exploring RConc and glass as relatively new material.
 * Glass eulogising poetry of Paul Scheerbart
 * Utopianism, Fantasy architecture, Futurism, Eclecticism
 * Bold use of colour in contrast to International style (architecture)
 * Sensuality vs functionality
 * Brief article stubs on Grosses Schauspielhaus, Glashaus, Chilehaus
 * Some comments: First, should we merge what we have on Grosses Schauspielhaus back here into expressionist architecture, and reduce G.S. to a oneline stub? I retract this, I think we should keep this as is, and write here how it relates to expressionist architecture. DVD+ R/W 23:21, 12 May 2006 (UTC) Second, Glashaus is a band, we could disambig, keep that mostly in the article Werkbund Exhibition (1914), or use (I'm thinking) Glass Pavilion for a separate article. Third, The first world war had a bearing, so did the second, we should consider that too. What are C20 movements?   DVD+ R/W 23:09, 12 May 2006 (UTC)


 * My thoughts on strategy:-
 * Agree Grosses Schauspielhaus should be a separate article.
 * Think we should disambig - wonder if the band are referencing Taut?
 * Think we need to clarify and restrict the article to the specifics of the european 1910-1925 movement mostly and then disucss how the terms has broadened later.
 * Seems functionalism and expressionism ran parallel lines in the Bauhaus until some shenanikans - good write up in Jencks which I'll try and distill in the next few days.
 * Think that Gaudi might be a problem as part of the definition because he builds also so much in the organicist mode. Expressionism isn't just 'Artistic freedom' - although that was one of it's tennets, so not totally convinced yet he ticks the expressionist boxes. More reading required on this one.--Mcginnly 23:42, 12 May 2006 (UTC)
 * C20 movements are 20th Century movements.
 * The politics are going to be quite important in this article - I'll get note writing on some of the thinking relating to 1. German war reparations. 2. Reactions to romanticism and the acceptance of the machine age. 3. Early socialism and the social determinism of architecture of the time. 4. The werkbund.
 * Important unbuilt design examples should be included. Some of the most important and most influential expressionist designs are either unbuilt, or in current circumstances are utopian and impractical. -- M0llusk 04:55, 28 July 2006 (UTC)

Potential Sources

 * http://www.kisbee.co.uk/sarc/ext-sa/taut.htm
 * http://www.archpedia.com/Styles-Expressionist.html
 * http://web.alva.uwa.edu.au/__data/page/88491/Expressionism_06.pdf

Timeline
Could we include some earlier dates in the 19th century, to list something about Nietzsche. He is definately an influence on expressionism, and should be in the timeline and also in the text. Kafka should also be mentioned, he corresponds with the timeline as is, I'll add some entries. DVD+ R/W 20:03, 2 June 2006 (UTC) I was able to enter the death of Nietzsche with the timeline as is. It might be better to keep from expanding too much into the 19th century and the precedents for expressionist architecture, though it might be nice to enter the publication date of lets say Thus Spoke Zarathustra and some other late-romantic era precedents. Any thoughts? DVD+ R/W 20:29, 2 June 2006 (UTC)
 * Sure, we should get something in about Freud and Jung I think too.--Mcginnly 22:14, 2 June 2006 (UTC)
 * Freud and Jung, definitely, and Darwin's The Expression of the Emotions in Man and Animals.
 * What section heading could we use to discuss Nietzsche, Freud, Jung and Darwin; maybe simply Philosophy? DVD+ R/W 22:49, 2 June 2006 (UTC)
 * Yeah I agree.--Mcginnly 22:14, 2 June 2006 (UTC)

Freedom Tower?
Is Freedom Tower considered to be expressionist? I've seen it referred to that way before.
 * Perhaps it would be fair to say there are expressionist elements to the design as a way of going part way with the statement? -- M0llusk 04:48, 28 July 2006 (UTC)

Contents / headings
A proposed change. It looks, to me, like there too many headings in this article. The content box leaves a long blank space adjacent to it, and it, itself seems too long. We need to try and prune a bit of the headings and consolidate, so it flows better from lead to body paragraphs. The timeline is a major contributor in this. It takes up 27 lines. I suggest we reduce it somehow, so that the content box is at least half the size it is now. Any thoughts? DVD+ R/W 22:22, 23 June 2006 (UTC) We need to start moving away from bullet points in the article, and toward complete sentances and paragraphs. DVD+ R/W 22:28, 23 June 2006 (UTC) We also need to start referencing our work with footnotes, I know it is another line in the content box, but it is necessary. DVD+ R/W 22:37, 23 June 2006 (UTC)
 * I have made changes to this effect, for your consideration and approval. DVD+ R/W 01:30, 24 June 2006 (UTC)
 * My book from amazon has finally arrived so I'll get some writing done this weekend. I'm fine with the changes to the timeline. I'd actually only made each year into headings to make it easier to edit - the intention was to completely remove them at the end, but I like the way you've done it. I did want to keep the distinction between the German expressionist movement and the amsterdam school, the german movement seems quite complex and needs to be examined in isolation first before discussion of parallel movements and legacies. --Mcginnly 10:41, 24 June 2006 (UTC)
 * I'm not so sure I like making the article too nationalistic, and making the article too much about Germany, and dividing it by country rather than content. I think we can mention Germany as needed but shouldn't make the headlines about any Country. I also think we should re consider adding Antoni Gaudí, he was well published at the time, Taut was certainly aware of his work and Finsterlin was friends with him.-Pehnt p. 59. Much of expressionist content is also evident with contemporaries Charles Rennie Mackintosh and Frank Lloyd Wright. -Pehnt p.8. DVD+ R/W 21:01, 25 June 2006 (UTC)
 * I'm afraid, (unusually) I have to disagree here. It's not a matter of making the article nationalistic, the point is that I'd like the article to first deal with the particular movements of big E expressionism and then deal with expressionist architecture (really architecture with more obvious emotional content than classic modernism). From what I've been reading, German expressionism arose out of a particularly germanic (and complex) melting pot of ideas and reactions to very diverse political, social and economic circumstances, particularly pertinent to german/austria/poland, whereas the amsterdam school, whilst sharing some of the influences, should be treated in a different way, because it's motivations and causes differed. Another important aspect of the germanic school are several sources that cite links between some of the activities and thinking behind german expressionism and the later nazi propaganda, which we'll need to address. Both schools however were a divergence, and seeking something different from art nouveau and the vienna secession and play complex roles in their influence on international style modernism, art deco and later styles. These are obviously moot points but we need some boundaries to frame the article. I think Gaudi should be considered as primarily an eclectic Art Nouveau practitioner who we should cite as contributing influence and FLW is a direct influence on the Amsterdam school through his 1900's portfolio and tour. Otherwise I worry that we risk writing a complete history of early 20th century european architecture in the one article.--Mcginnly 00:58, 26 June 2006 (UTC)

=Original German Page=
 * de:Expressionismus (Architektur)

Expressionist architecture is an almost exclusively German phenomenon which started at the end of World War I and lasted until the end of the 1920's. Adolf Behne had described Bruno Tauts architecture as being Expressionist in the magazine Pan. Many of the architects had previously been exponents of Art Nouveau and were members of the Deutscher Werkbund. Most later went on to become Modernists.

Characteristics
Unlike Modernist architecture, expressionist architecture used rounded and serrated forms.

Brick was typical used for expressionist buildings. Concrete was also used. Around 1920, new building materials were being experimented with in a number of styles. The possibilities of curved forms particularly interested the expressionists. At the Einstein Tower in Potsdam, it was planned that concrete should be used. It was actually consructed in brick and then plastered over - probably because construction of the formwork would have been too great a problem.

The movement is remarkable for the synthesis of the arts in nearly all buildings and Interior design. Frequently sculpture was included in Relief. Also, silent films offered an outlet for architectural fantasies. Hans Poelzig designed the sets for the 1920 film "Golem".
 * Many expressionist designs remained unbuilt utopias.

Architects and Buidlings
For most architects Expressionism was a relatively short phase in their careers. This applies, for example to Hans Poelzig who later turned to Modernist architecture. The Grosses Schauspielhaus in Berlin was the first building of the style. The drip-like interior became particularly famous.

1920-1921  Erich Mendelsohn  builds, probably the most famous expressionist building: Einstein tower in Potsdam-Babelsberg.

Even Bauhaus projects such as the Sommerfield residence "Haus Sommerfeld" in Berlin by Walter Gropius and Adolf Meyer were very expressionistically styled in the 1920s. The house was planned as an expressionistic synthesis of the arts. Gropius and Meyer worked very closely with the wood carver Jost Schmidt and the stained glass craftsman Josef Albers.

The Chilehaus in Hamburg by Fritz Höger or 1922-1924 influenced the Anzeiger-Hochhaus in Hannover in 1927-1928. The anthropologist centre building Goetheanum in Dornach, Switzerland built between 1924-1928 for Rudolf Steiner, exhibits very strong influences of expressionism. Bernhard Hoetger worked as a sculptor in Worpswede on the Böttcherstraße until 1931.

Outside of Germany, the Amsterdam School with the work of Michel de Klerk was of significance. After World War I and the expressionist architect group Glass Chain of Bruno Taut, Hans Scharoun established The Ring. His later buildings, such as the famous Philharmonie in Berlin (1956-1963), with organic architecture demonstrates Scharouns expressionist past.

Further expressionist architecture or buildings with an expressionistic resemblance:
 * Volkshaus Rotthausen in Gelsenkirchen (Alfred Fischer (architect), 1920-1921)
 * Pallottinerkirche St. Johannes der Täufer (Freising), 1928-1930 by Jan Hubert Pinand
 * Station conversion Stuttgart, Bolzstraße
 * Regional finance office, Stuttgart, Lautenschlagerstraße
 * Town hall in Oberhausen (Completed 1930)
 * Heilig-Kreuz-Church in Gelsenkirchen-Ückendorf
 * "Bastei" in Cologne on the bank of the Rhein.

=Original Polish Page= Unedited translation from http://www.poltran.com/pl.php4

Ekspresjonizm Direction in architecture about features modernist - equal, as well as with modernism contradictory, in lats (summers; years) in Europe 1910-1935 developing (spread out), equivalent have in united states too, where usually defined takes place as article Deco. Strong enhancement of vertical direction was for characteristic ekspresjonizmu or horizontal, creation of dynamic form for induction of impression strzelistości, modernity, if (or) building functions in that speed. It dry artistic (plastic; vivid) forms from nature as well as it refer to gothic elements. First of all, movement (traffic) spread out in germany eksresjonistyczny, besides, certain meaning in holland achieving and countries of central Europe. Correspondence round presented main organization of expressionist & # 257 Die Gl; them ( serne Kette. Glass chain ), in (to) 1919 by members of advices of (councils of) artists concentrated around zawiązany Brunona Tauta. Letters (lists) were published by under nicknames Tauta. Ideas of expressionists were factorial utopijne and anarchistic, were tied with faith to power architecture glass house sprawczą and revolution. Crown of city had to become main architectonic motive - kind great center culture. Cities had substitute become (stay) loose housing estates, inhabitants had to be related with nature which (who) strictly. It was emerged from mid-year change 20 ekspresjonizmu. Style so called opływowy, called dynamic style too, referring to modern forms of cars, aircraft, but especially transatlantyków. Framer, functional project designs (projection) recognizing (regard) requirement, this way, they wanted to transmit pop-up form with their apprehension of programs buildings and typologii.

Taking stock
I'd like to try to resolve a few things which I'm still not happy with if possible and instigate a review of the article.
 * 1) Originally I'd seen the article structure as beginning with a description of the Expressionist movements proper - encompassing the German/Austrian strands and then the amsterdam school. and then leading on to a discussion as to how the term came to mean something wider. - Currently, the article is seemingly predicated on a different structure and DVD has attempted to write the article without mentioning specific countries, explaining he doesn't want the article "too nationalistic". I think we need to talk about this. I don't have a clear sense of what he thinks expressionism actually is, if it's origins weren't in a germanic/dutch utopian movement and the first "context" paragraph seems out of place unless it's clear why we're suddenly talking about germany/austria.
 * 2) We keep ending up with references to Gaudi - I think once we've communicated our views as to what we think the sources are saying expressionism is, then we'll be able to agree on the inclusion or otherwise of gaudi as an expressionist. I think the problem might be that Pehnt cites him as relevant whilst the other sources don't mention him. I don't have Pehnt or Sharpe some I'm a bit blind on that. Can we discuss it?
 * 3) I'm quite happy to junk the timeline as it stands, but I'd like to see the article rewritten with more of a chronological narrative style.
 * 4) The list of characteristics at the beginning - I worry it needs more citations and more context for the lay-reader to understand. eg "Often hybrid solutions, irreducible to a single concept" - solutions to what, why is it significant to reduce the building to a single concept - isn't this true of a lot of architecture? and "Tendency more towards the gothic than the classical. Expressionist architecture also tends more towards the romanesque and the rococo than the classical." perhaps the gothic, classical, romanesque and rococo need more explanation than just the links.

--Mcginnly | Natter 17:42, 4 December 2006 (UTC)

Crosspost
Crossposted from user talk pages

''He DVD, I notice we've both revived editing the Expressionist architecture article, prior to it's impending GA review. I've archived the talk BTW, because most of it was used as a scratch sheet for translations etc. - hope that's ok. I'd like some discussion about the article though if you wouldn't mind, because there's still a few fundamental things that I think we disagreed on at the time and I'd like to us reach some sort of agreement on. I've started a thread at Talk:Expressionist architecture. Cheers --Mcginnly | Natter 16:51, 4 December 2006 (UTC)''


 * Mcginnly, I think you are asking about whether Gaudi made expressionist architecture, I see it as common knowledge, here are some quick examples of other peoples deductions:

Shannon Ricketts, Leslie Maitland, Jacqueline Hucker. A Guide to Canadian Architectural Styles. Published 2003 Broadview Press. ISBN 1551115468

p. 211

"This style had its roots in the European Expressionist movement of the early twentieth century. At that time, architects such as Antonio Gaudi, Hans Poelzig, and Eric Mendelsohn were experimenting with the ability of new materials, especially concrete, to produce dramatic and often eccentric structures."

Faia Wertheimer, Lester Wertheimer. Architectural History. Originally published: [S.l.] : Architectural License Seminars, c1985. Published 2004 Kaplan AEC Architecture ISBN 079319380X

p. 117 "This fine example of Expressionist architecture, perhaps even late-blooming Art Nouveau..."
 * Casa Mila

Ernest E. Burden. Illustrated Dictionary of Architecture Published 2002 McGraw-Hill Professional ISBN 0071375295

p. 124 "A northern European style (1903-1925) that did not treat buildings only as purely functional structures, but as sculptural objects in their own right. Works typical of this style were by Antonio Gaudi in Spain, P.W. Jensen Klint in Denmark, and Eric Mendelsohn and Hans Poelzig in Germany."
 * Expressionism

Sufficient? Now that the thread is there, I'll take a look - but I've been up late so probably won't answer 'till tomorrow. While I'm here, what is your opinion of this ? DVD+ R/W 17:43, 4 December 2006 (UTC)

A suggestion
I've done some digging and I think I've found the root of the problem:-

"Expressionism - a widely applicable term used since 1910 of al the arts in three main senses. (paraphrasing now)
 * Type 1. A certain type of expressive emphasis found in all the arts, throughout history across the globe - examples are cited such as Dostoevsky, Strindberg, El Greco, Van Gogh.
 * Type 2. All the modern movement in Germany and Austro Hungary between 1910 and 1924 which flavoured the local variants of Fauvism, Cubism and Futurism and formed the basis of both Dada and Neue Sachlichkeit. It was later extended backwards to Munch and the early works of Die Brücke. The term entered Germany through France in 1910. It's trademarks were distortion, fragmentation and the communication of violent or overstressed emotion. Pacifist and socialist political agenda etc.etc.
 * Type 3.Any 20th century work of art in other countries or continents which reflect the influence of German expressionism. eg Laethem-Saint-Martin, some of the Ecole de Paris and abstract expressionism."

So firstly, with reference to the above citations:-
 * 1) Shannon Ricketts - appears to be confusing and merging type 1 expressionism with type 2. See Frampton p66 "Seen in retrospect, the Casa Mila seems to anticipate something of the ethos of the Expressionism that was soon to emerge in Central Europe."
 * 2) Faia Wertheimer - type 1 expressionism
 * 3) Ernest E. Burden - type 2 expressionism extended backwards to include the work of Gaudi.

I'm keen to rewrite the lead to include these 3 distinctions.

Curl elaborates further "Artistic movement in Northern Europe, especially in Germany and the Netherlands from c1905 to 1930, it was concerned in architecture not to emphasise function but to create free and powerful sculptural forms, often crystalline, sometimes sharply angular, and occasionally stalactitic." He then cites examples in the netherlands and denmark (Jensen Klint as above) and then says "In Germany, however there were several outstanding article......"

I think the article needs to be structured with a chronology that reflects the growth of the umbrella term "Expressionism" and can't really shy away from it's northern european roots - we can then deal with "later scholars broadened the term to include both works of architecture before 1910 and works outside of northern europe such as Gaudi.

Regards. --Mcginnly | Natter 22:40, 4 December 2006 (UTC)


 * I've tweaked the lead quite a bit to reflect some of this. What do you think?--Mcginnly | Natter 02:02, 5 December 2006 (UTC)


 * I'm confused, carry on though. DVD+ R/W 02:15, 5 December 2006 (UTC)


 * Which bit is causing the headache? --Mcginnly | Natter 02:17, 5 December 2006 (UTC)


 * A RL headache. Like I said though, please carry on. DVD+ R/W 02:21, 5 December 2006 (UTC)

More Gaudi and expressionism
James M Richards, Nikolaus Pevsner, Dennis Sharp. The Anti-Rationalists and the Rationalists. Architectural Press. Published 2000. ISBN 0750648155

p.75 (Casa Vicens)"The Gaudi building contains the germ of all the later Expressionist developments..."


 * here's another, one more in a sec. DVD+ R/W 02:09, 6 December 2006 (UTC)

Frampton, Kenneth (2004). Modern architecture - a critical history. Third edition. World of Art.

p.66

"Prominent among Guell's enthusiasms were Ruskin and Wagner, and Gaudi seems to have been as much affected by the theories of the one as the music-dramas of the other."

and

"Seen in retrospect, the Casa Mila seems to anticipate something of the ethos of the Expressionism that was soon to emerge in Central Europe."

from the same page. DVD+ R/W 02:15, 6 December 2006 (UTC)

replies to
Taking stock== ==


 * 1) The people involved in expressionism and expressionist architecture were not germanic/dutch but were pretty diverse. Nationalistic might not be the word I should use for when they get called this, but you keep saying germanic about people and ideas that were not really, I still don't know why.
 * 2) About Gaudi and expressionism- I have brought for you a few cited passages from other writers, do you see now that other sources mention him?
 * 3) I don't mind the timeline, here is another format to consider though, Template:Cgtimeline. I guess I still favor sections based on topics rather than chronology, or worse maybe, countries, I don't think this article is about that or chronology.
 * 4) I don't know what the lay-reader will understand. Do you? I think characteristics are very important, and that they should be concise, whether or not I outlined them well, I don't know.


 * signed: DVD+ R/W 03:19, 6 December 2006 (UTC)


 * Ok, in retrospect Gaudi can be seen as anticipating expressionism. Doesn't make him part of the movement, and the mood is very different. Nikky Pevsner (Outline of European Architecture, pre ISBN) is clear that "the troubled mood of 1919... twisted the new architecture into an Expressionism in some ways more akin to Art Nouveau than to the style of 1914". He states the Expressionist tendency was strongest in Germany, but "not entirely absent in some other countries", citing Copenhagen, and the best known international contribution being Dutch. Sounds rather germanic to me. .. dave souza, talk 10:52, 6 December 2006 (UTC)


 * David, I paraphrased a 3 part definition of expressionism above, here it is again:-


 * When you say "The people involved in expressionism and expressionist architecture were not germanic/dutch but were pretty diverse" can I assume you are refering to type 1 or 3? We can agree on this I think. But there was a definite germanic/dutch movement from 1910- ca.1930 called expressionism - I've provided referenced citations for that in the article lead. The diversity which you talk about might be understood as applying too broad a definition to what expressionism was. My contention remains that the term was first applied to describe the germanic/dutch movement and then broadened in scope to describe pretty much any architecture with a non-functionalist, non-sachlichkeit expressive emphasis throughout history. I think the article would be better structured, dealing first with the germanic/dutch movements and then, if you like, using gaudi as an example to illustrate how the term was redefined. I'll have a look at the other timeline and respond later. No, I've no idea what the lay-reader will understand - maybe we should get some feedback from the great unwashed. Cheers. --Mcginnly | Natter 11:27, 6 December 2006 (UTC)

Yes there are many definitions, why this 3 part one? The architecture critics I cited you say are confused about the term then you cite political scientists, shouldn't this definition be from an architecture or an art critic? Expressionism was an art movement- not a national, political, or racial one.

Some more definitions, still not art critics as such, but still poignant:

Columbia encyclopedia,. Note- it is all about individuals and art groups, no mention of what you are talking about.

The New York Times Guide To Essential Knowledge: A Desk Reference for the Curious Mind p. 99 [drastically paraphrased]

The first expressionist movement was the fauves, then the Vienna Secession, then Die Brucke.

Note this same book places Modigliani under symbolism, though he seems expressionist to me. Also, why put a Poelzig building in the lead, I'd suggest one by Taut or Mendelsohn, why not the Einstein Tower? If you really want to make this chronological, it should go Gaudi, Vienna Secession (which we haven't really mentioned), then Mendelsohn, the Glass Chain and so on. We also need to brush up on the sources- the most primary, the middle ones (Pehnt, and Sharpe) that discuss this extensively, and the later surveys. DVD+ R/W 08:21, 7 December 2006 (UTC)


 * Ok I'm happy to discuss pre-'expressionist movement' developments in art and architecture - including gaudi, fauvism, cubism, theories of perception etc before we get into the germanic/dutch movement proper. What political scientists? - the authors of The Dictionary of Modern Thought? - it's a book that encompasses everything from anarcho-syndicalism through general relativity to brutalism. The point is, if there are many definitions then this should be discussed in the article. Curl's definition also talks about german, dutch and danish expressionism. Also, here's a partitial review of Pehnt's book. . It suggests his net is cast too wide. --Mcginnly | Natter 10:15, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
 * Here an art definition from the Tate stating Van Goch as a starting point for the 'movement'. I've also read expressionism defined as a reaction to impressionism ie. an attempt to express the viewers inner reaction to a subject rather than the surface imression of it. --Mcginnly | Natter 10:44, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
 * The poelzig building is in the lead because it's early and has that slightly scary gaping mouthed quality that some of expressionism was about - I put it there as an alternative to Mies's skyscraper - in itself also interesting to demonstrate how the visionary, utopian idealism of expressionism did actually later translate and feedback into later modernist buildings. I'm happy to include the einstein tower - it's certainly the most recognisable building of the movement. You say "Expressionism was an art movement- not a national, political, or racial one" I'd agree with this to a point, but art movements in those days usually did have a geographic neucleus - in this case it was germany - most of the proponents were german or certainly northern european and most of them did have political agendas. There are so many sources that refer to German Expressionism and the Amsterdam school I'm struggling to understand why you don't want to make it explicit in the article, it's like taking the Prairie School and removing it's geographical and political context and looking at all long, low, craftish buildings through history. --Mcginnly | Natter 10:59, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

Another county heard from
DVD asked me to weigh in on this. Two first impressions: - Jmabel | Talk 17:07, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
 * I think we should say very early that the term refers originally to a time-bound European movement but also more loosely to earlier and later works related to that movement by influence or even merely by resemblance, beginning at least as early as Gaudí and continuing at least as far as Frank Gehry, the latter of whom is currently not mentioned at all.
 * The list of ten characteristics of expressionist architecture might be strengthened by mentioning for each characteristic an aspect of a specific building or structure that exemplifies it.


 * Thanks Jmabel - we need some wider opinions like this. I attempted some of what you suggest in the lead (I've yet to include it in the body text until we've resolved the structure) - I'm scratching out an alternative structure for discussion at Expressionist architecture/Structure redesign sandbox. --Mcginnly | Natter 18:10, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

GA on hold
I've placed this article on hold because I feel it's a little short of meeting the Good Article criteria, but I'm also confident that these issues can be addressed quickly. Namely: I'll review the article for GA status in a week, or when I receive notice (here or on my talk page) that an editor believes the article is ready. Shimeru 22:51, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
 * The article could use a copyedit for grammar and style. Italicization of published works' titles, for instance, is not always present, and there are some issues regarding usage of commas, semicolons, and colons.  The text of the article is well-written, though it could be tightened up a bit, but errors like these detract from it and make it more difficult to read.
 * A few unsourced/OR statements, such as "The name of Ferris' 1929 book The Metropolis of Tommorrow, seems inspired by the 1927 Film, Metropolis." Wikipedia cannot draw possibly-controversial conclusions; we can only cite conclusions others have drawn.  "Seems" is a word to be wary of, if it's not inside a quote.  (This example also shows some of the style and punctuation issues I referenced above; "film" should not be capitalized, and there's no need for the comma before the film's title.)
 * The large whitespace gap at the bottom of the "Materials" section, caused by the second photo, is distracting; it interrupts the reader. Could the images be rearranged so that it doesn't exist?  This is a matter of personal preference, and wouldn't stand in the way of the article becoming a GA, but I do believe it would improve the article.
 * The "Timeline" is long and very list-y. Perhaps it could be split into two sections, a shorter "Timeline" summarizing events in one sentence and a prose "History" covering in depth the more significant events, such as the Bauhaus phase ending in 1923?  I would not personally see this standing in the way of the article becoming a GA, but it might for an FA, and I presume you'd like to take it to that level.
 * The article is cited pretty thoroughly, but the vast majority (about 75%) of the citations point to the same reference, Pehnt. I don't dispute that it's a reliable source, but I think it would be better to draw more evenly from several sources, rather than to rest so much of the article on a single source.
 * Thanks for all the comments Shimeru, but I withdrew the GAC. DVD+ R/W 05:05, 8 December 2006 (UTC)
 * Comment
 * We've been having argument after argument at WP:GA. Really, you should buy some popcorn and watch the show. :-)
 * The direction it seems to be going in is this: watch out for WP:LEAD, Embedded list and Verifiability. I don't think this particular article needs to worry about how broad its coverage is, or WP:NPOV. All matters of writing style are under debate (or will be soon), and so... are far less important, at least.
 * Cheers--Ling.Nut 07:54, 10 December 2006 (UTC)

Removed
Someone removed this image - I'm leaving it here until we can determine a) if it is a Hans Poelzig building b) if it is the upper silesia tower.
 * it is certainly expressionist by inspection.



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More Gaudi and expressionism (II)
Expressionist architecture: Casa Milà by Antoni Gaudi or National Museum by Douglas Cardinal? A question of taste. In Europe Antoni Gaudi is seen as the father of Expressionist architecture (Erich Mendelsohn, Piet Kramer, ...). Leuk2 (talk) 12:28, 26 November 2008 (UTC)