Talk:Expressive suppression

Wiki Education assignment: Adult Development Fall 2023
— Assignment last updated by Breadlover2350 (talk) 00:45, 8 November 2023 (UTC)

Citations/headings
Many claims are made throughout this article without citations. This article would also benefit from less headings with more information dense sections, rather than many different, short sections throughout the article. Many of these sections could likely be either eliminated or combined to create less choppy sections throughout the article. Breadlover2350 (talk) 06:29, 3 December 2023 (UTC)

Tone/flow
This article is also very choppy. It doesn't seem to have a very academic tone. It is mostly choppy sentences with claims that are not backed by evidence. Breadlover2350 (talk) 06:30, 3 December 2023 (UTC)