Talk:Extra Texture (Read All About It)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 15:33, 16 July 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * Why was the tour controversial? Maybe it was just poorly received?
 * ✅ yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 19:17, 20 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "last-ever" - overmphasized, just "last"
 * ✅ yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 19:17, 20 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "It is considered to be Harrison's soul album, " - Confusing. Reword it.
 * ✅ But I think, I may have made it more confusing(?) yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 19:17, 20 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Yes. How about "Featuring elements of soul music and demonstrating..., the album was something..."-- GoP  TCN 09:10, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Sounds good. Added. yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 09:56, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "hit single in the song "You"," - in the song? Maybe "it produced the moderate hit single, "You"". Also how can it be both moderate and a hit single?
 * Would "it produced the moderately hit single" work? yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 19:17, 20 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Better-- GoP T C N 09:10, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
 * ✅ yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 09:56, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Why does Forum links to a city?
 * ✅ "Forum shows, in Los Angeles". yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 19:17, 20 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "(from Horn)" - Horn is a band?
 * ✅ Jim Horn. Session musician. yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 19:17, 20 July 2012 (UTC)
 * The article has too many overemphasized language, eg "last-ever", can be just last
 * ✅ Fixed. yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 19:17, 20 July 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall: Just a few small issues.-- GoP T C N 18:44, 20 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall: Just a few small issues.-- GoP T C N 18:44, 20 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * Pass Great article! :)-- GoP T C N 09:59, 21 July 2012 (UTC)