Talk:Eye movement in reading/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Crisco 1492 (talk · contribs) 07:20, 7 December 2011 (UTC)


 * I will do this review over the next day or so. Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:20, 7 December 2011 (UTC)

Comments

 * 1a
 * The text reads like a text-book. Due to previous paraphrasing issues, it would be preferable if you do a rewrite to make the text less similar to the source text.
 * 1b
 * Per Wikipedia MOS guidelines, we should not repeat the title of the article in the section headers


 * 2a
 * You need to standardize the formatting of your references. Note how in the last paragraph of the text you have both footnotes and in-text citations. Footnotes are preferred.


 * 3a
 * Is there a distinction between left-to-right languages like English, right-to-left languages like Arabic, and up-to-down languages like Mandarin? This should be discussed.


 * 4
 * Example:
 * 2b
 * Some paragraphs are entirely unreferenced. For example, the second paragraph of the first section.


 * On hold pending major fixes. Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:41, 7 December 2011 (UTC)