Talk:F.H. Buckley

Hei, I am new to this and I am not sure what I should improve in this article. I would appreciate some concrete hints, thanx --Andrea (talk) 01:01, 2 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Some suggestions - others will come along and help as well
 * Add wikilinks - I've done the 1st paragraph for you. Link important words to other article pages (but only the first time the word or phrase is used) - if the article page does not match the text exactly then use a pipe Page Text - "Page Text" shows on the page and is blue, and when clicked jumps to "Page Name".
 * More references - ideally neutral - see reliable sources - all the refs appear to be "educational" sites, such a combination may not give the required neutrality required.
 * Hope that helps for now  Ron h jones (Talk) 01:17, 2 November 2010 (UTC)

ok i will fix the other references then thanx--Andrea (talk) 01:32, 2 November 2010 (UTC)