Talk:F. Lee Bailey/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:20, 9 March 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  17:20, 9 March 2018 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a ✅
 * 1.b ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a ✅
 * 2.b ✅
 * 2.c ✅
 * 2.d ✅ (Highest is 66.1%, however it is a youtube video and likely copied from the wikipedia article.)
 * 3
 * 3.a ✅
 * 3.b ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a ✅
 * 6.b ✅
 * No DAB links ✅
 * No dead links   :
 * Judge cuts couple's jail term". Orlando Sentinel. March 25, 2006
 * Judge cuts couple's jail term". Orlando Sentinel. March 25, 2006
 * No missing citations   :
 * He served as a jet fighter pilot and then began to serve as a squadron legal officer, the role he filled until he resigned his commission in 1956.
 * Guests were questioned by Bailey and were then submitted to a polygraph test, which was discussed at the conclusion of the show.


 * Due to the missing citations I am placing the review on hold, will continue once the citations have been added. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  14:05, 3 April 2018 (UTC)
 * taken care of. There was only one instance of the mentioned dead link. (talk page stalker) CrashUnderride 20:57, 3 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Believe the Guests were questioned by Bailey and were then submitted to a polygraph test, which was discussed at the conclusion of the show. part is still missing a citation; everything else fixed. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  13:15, 4 April 2018 (UTC)
 * I trimmed it to fit what I could find a source for and it's now sourced. (talk page stalker) CrashUnderride 00:38, 5 April 2018 (UTC)

Prose Suggestions
Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.
 * For most of his career he was licensed in Massachusetts and in Florida, where he was disbarred in 2001. suggest For most of his career he was licensed in Massachusetts, until he was disbarred in 2003, and in Florida, where he was disbarred in 2001.
 * In 2014, he was denied a law license by the Maine Board of Bar Examiners and the Maine Supreme Judicial Court. suggest In 2014, he was denied a law license by the Maine Board of Bar Examiners and, on appeal, by the Maine Supreme Judicial Court.
 * That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  10:33, 23 April 2018 (UTC)