Talk:F. Scott Fitzgerald/Archive 2

Coining ‘The Jazz Age’
I re-drafted the lede of this article, mentioning that the phrase 'The Jazz Age' was Fitzgerald's own coinage. Someone has edited this out. But the dedicated Wiki page says this:


 * American author F. Scott Fitzgerald is widely credited with coining the term, first using it in the title of his 1922 short story collection, Tales of the Jazz Age. 

Maybe we need to specify that it is only credited to him. But I think it is an appropriate mention. (I realise, of course, that if it's in the lede, it needs to be in the main article too.) If no-one objects, I will re-insert it presently. Valetude (talk) 19:15, 15 January 2019 (UTC)

Tense problem in "Portrayals"
Present tense turns to future tense in A reworked version of Wildhorn's musical, titled Zelda – An American Love Story, with a script and lyrics by Jack Murphy and currently in production at Flat Rock Playhouse,[67] will have its New York premiere in 2016, presented by Marymount Manhattan College, at the National Dance Institute.[68] Will (talk) 18:02, 5 February 2019 (UTC)
 * I've just changed everything to past tense since it was in 2016, which will hopefully be sufficient. In the future, if you see any way to improve an article, I encourage you to please be bold and made the amendment yourself, especially if it is minor. :) Opencooper (talk) 02:34, 6 February 2019 (UTC)

Note for 2021
There is a fantastic image] of Hemingway and Fitzgerald together in Paris. However, it was made in 1925, so the copyright will not expire until 2021. If you know of any other appropriate images, please contribute. Thanks. ~ HAL  333  19:45, 15 April 2020 (UTC)