Talk:FIFA Champions Badge/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 09:14, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

Reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020 MWright96 (talk) 09:14, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

General

 * All references in the prose and tables should be rearranged in numerical order and not jumbled up in an incorrect order. ✅

Badge rules

 * "The badge has the shape of a shield measuring 78 millimetres by 58 millimetres," - The 78 by badge is shaped like a shield,. ✅
 * "and shows the image of the relevant trophy" - displays. ✅

Non-FIFA competitions

 * "during F.A. Cup fixtures" - the full stops in "F.A." are not needed in these modern times. ✅
 * "badge during F.A. Cup fixtures but not in Premier League fixtures," - try not to repeat the same word close together in the same sentences. ✅
 * "the English FA granted Liverpool F.C." - the "F.C." is not needed. ✅

National teams

 * "In September 2008, the badge was extended to the FIFA World Cup and was presented to Italy, who were reigning champions (having won it in 2006)," - better the defending champions from 2006 Italy,. ✅

Records

 * The mentions of the phrase "(see table below)" are not needed on this encyclopedia. ✅

Continuous periods

 * The second paragraph should be referenced with reliable citations - SEE COMMENTS BELOW

Number of times

 * The whole section is unreferenced and will require citations from reliable sources - SEE COMMENTS BELOW
 * "Real Madrid has won right to wear the badge four times since its inception, while Barcelona has won the right three times" - earned the insignia to avoid repetition of the same phrase in the same sentence. ✅
 * "the Portugal national beach soccer team is has won the right twice" - the word in bold should be deleted as it is out of place. ✅

Beach soccer: Male

 * Portugal in the table has no reference at all. ✅

Reply
, thank you for that - very helpful comments. I have been able to fix most of them (noted above under each one), except for the questions for citations in the "Records" section. The "Number of Times" sub-section is just a summary from the tables below; it is not cited anywhere, but I don't think would be OR as the tables should be straightforward to read? Same issue with the USWNT record (although, there was a specific FIFA post on this on their website but it has become broken and can't link to it anymore); however, the UNWNT are the only team to win it more than once in a row, so again, I was hoping the tables would suffice (hence why I had the "see table below" part). Hope that makes sense? Look forward to your comments. Thanks again. Britishfinance (talk) 19:24, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * It does make sense your comments. Will promote to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 09:08, 4 April 2020 (UTC)
 * - thank you for that, much appreciated :) Britishfinance (talk) 09:50, 4 April 2020 (UTC)