Talk:FOSSA Systems

What are the main things I can improve to make this a class-A article?
Hi, can anyone give me ideas on how I can break up the text with more headers in the beginning section? To make it less long like a wall of text and easier to read/skim through. Much appreciated. KaylaLoebl111 (talk) 05:51, 23 April 2023 (UTC)


 * if can get rid of the the advertisement part in the introduction were how gadgets are, the mesurements and how light they are etc because it is not what we reading we are reading about the company so insted can say what are their teck do shortly and what their purpose by doing it so maybe. It is what I am thinking that can make article better and get rid of the advertisement or making it less advertasible. Hüseyin03Keskin (talk) 08:19, 25 April 2023 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your help KaylaLoebl111 (talk) 05:24, 16 September 2023 (UTC)

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KaylaLoebl111 (talk) 05:26, 16 September 2023 (UTC)