Talk:Face lift dentistry

Obviously promotional
I'm sorry, but the content of this article is obviously promotional. The subject here should be Muslin, not his product. And that is what this is - a product. It's not a "medical procedure" as a article purports; it's basically a press release selling Muslin's product disguised as a Wikipedia article. It makes a range of medical claims without any references to WP:MEDRS sources or Wikipedia rules governing the making of medical claims. The claims are sourced to articles by the product's owner talking about how great the product is. I strongly suspect there's some paid editing going on here - a truly neutral article wouldn't read anything like this.  St ★ lwart 1 1 1 07:04, 6 October 2014 (UTC)


 * I've started removing some of the puffery and adding some sources explaining the risks.  St ★ lwart 1 1 1 07:12, 6 October 2014 (UTC)

Editor's Response
Can you check it now, since I spent time to try to save this page. This is a good tech, so I tried to help to improve it. Indepentten (talk) 02:26, 30 September 2015 (UTC)
 * Not very good changes, being overly promotional and not using WP:MEDRS for medical detail (or WP:RS much in general). But when I tried to fix this you just reverted to your version ... Alexbrn (talk) 02:30, 30 September 2015 (UTC)
 * I undid the recent additions based on this and this press release. These are not wp:RS by a long stretch. LeadSongDog come howl!  04:10, 30 September 2015 (UTC)

Not a notable subject for a wikipedia article?
I ran some google books and pubmed searches and did not find any suitable sources for this topic. Article has now been redirected to cosmetic dentistry by another editor anyway. Matthew Ferguson (talk) 10:45, 1 October 2015 (UTC)