Talk:Face to Face (The Kinks album)/Archive 1

Tone
This article is written like a poetic personal review ignoring WP:NOR and WP:NPOV. Reads more like a grade 5 school boy book report instead of an encyclopedia article. The Real Libs-speak politely 14:02, 3 April 2009 (UTC)

The album's songs are rife with Davies' sardonic wit, skewering the vapid Don Juan of "Dandy" and the self-absorption and hypocrisy of the wealthy elite on "House in the Country" and "Most Exclusive Residence for Sale". Hm, see what you mean... though there are some big words there. It's more like an intelligent Year 9 trying too hard! Another major problem is the lack of references. If I get time I'll try to tidy this up. Jubilee♫ clipman 22:30, 23 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Addendum: most of the article appears to have been lifted word for word from various blogs some time in 2005, which explains the over-indulgent tone. Definitely needs rewording. Jubilee♫ clipman  23:10, 23 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Addendum: I cleaned up some of the clumsy phrasing. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 195.158.103.206 (talk) 12:41, 24 April 2012 (UTC)