Talk:FactCheckArmenia.com

NPOV
Hello

Can you please tell me what is NPOV about this edit: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=FactCheckArmenia.com&oldid=1061665094 ?

I had already removed the section headings. I realized that was over the top. But the rest is just the same content better expressed.

Thank you for your opinion, I hope to hear it.

Thanks--217.149.166.11 (talk) 03:42, 23 December 2021 (UTC)


 * I don't see it as an improvement. With controversial organizations it's often preferred to start with the stated purpose and then move on to independent evaluations. We can't say that the website is Turkish since the sources just say it has connections to the Turkish government. Your version uses "scare quotes" which are to be avoided in encyclopedic style. Also "Ermeni Kırımı" is not the Turkish for "Armenian genocide" (that would be Ermeni soykırımı). And there's no need for phrases like "virtually all historical research and scholarship" that exaggerate and aren't supported by the cited sources. (t &#183; c)  buidhe  08:20, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Am I still allowed to make paragraph breaks and so on tho? I dont think the current version is readible217.149.166.11 (talk) 09:12, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Alright, I allowed myself to modify the page very slightly, with breaks added and repeated sources deleted. Let me know your thoughts--217.149.166.11 (talk) 09:17, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
 * These edits are fine. (t &#183; c)  buidhe  09:25, 23 December 2021 (UTC)