Talk:Fader Bergström/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:13, 17 June 2022 (UTC)

I will review this one today! --K. Peake 07:13, 17 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank you so much! Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:50, 17 June 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * Thanks.
 * Remove the best-known and best-loved songs part, as that is not sourced
 * Done.
 * Add a sentence ending the lead about the reception/legacy of the composition
 * Done.

Context

 * Good
 * Thanks.

Music and verse form

 * Add relevant text to the audio sample to justify usage
 * Added.
 * Pipe 3/4 time to Triple metre
 * Done.

Lyrics

 * Pipe Fredman to Jean Fredman
 * Done.

Reception
^* Done.
 * Retitle to Reception and legacy
 * Done.
 * "before the Chancellor of Justice. Fortunately" → "before the Chancellor of Justice and fortunately,"
 * Are you sure unbridled is an appropriate term here?
 * Said 'unrestrained' instead. Means the same thing.
 * Pipe street-girls to Prostitution
 * Done.
 * Add the release year of Glimmande nymf
 * Added.
 * Imgs look good!!
 * Thanks.

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 07:36, 17 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Done all those, thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:01, 17 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Nice work on this, but you still need to fix the Chanceller prose in reception since those sentences are too short to be on their own. --K. Peake 20:47, 17 June 2022 (UTC)

Done. Chiswick Chap (talk) 21:17, 17 June 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, thanks for fixing everything so quickly! --K. Peake 07:02, 18 June 2022 (UTC)