Talk:Failure in the Saddle

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I am confused as to why there is a tag on the top of the article saying it reads like an advertisement. I do not wish it to be an advertisement, but rather, I was trying to set up a book page like other books have such as "Jurassic Park" to simply include the book description. If there is a way I can fix the problem to make it more neutral, I would appreciate any advice. Thanks- Militarybooks, June 6, 2011 12:52 PST
 * I've fixed the article - by trimming it brutally. It's a valid subject for an article, but this was just so much puffery. DS (talk) 14:37, 2 July 2011 (UTC)


 * now it's about the right length, given the sources TEDickey (talk) 15:05, 2 July 2011 (UTC)