Talk:Fakhr al-Mulk Ridwan/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 04:19, 12 July 2021 (UTC)


 * The short description should go to the top of the article (MOS:ORDER).
 * "giving them freedom" "giving them the freedom"
 * "as appanage" "as an appanage"
 * Remove the comma after "reach out to Tutush".
 * Remove the comma after "28 August 1097".
 * "Duqaq latter feared" "Duqaq later feared"
 * "give Ridwan an opportunity" "allow Ridwan"
 * Capitalize Sufis.
 * Remove the comma after "lands surrounding Aleppo".
 * Sort categories in alphabetical order.

Comments by Solavirum
Fixed everything till the alphabetization of the categories.
 * Note that most of the background section of the article shares similarity to this article's background section, which we touched upon here. --► Sincerely:  Sola virum  20:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)