Talk:Falko Bindrich/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Epicgenius(talk to me • see my contributions) 20:40, 18 April 2013 (UTC)


 * Minor grammar errors (like "...2009 and 2010 Chess Olympiads In 2012..." in Paragraph 2. There's no period, in this case.
 * done, thanks for catching that.


 * This only shows Bindrich's career from 2003 to 2011. There's no history of his career after that. (Although, you can include "2012 Bundesliga cheating accusations" as a subsection of his career)
 * I'll try to add a few details from after 2011. Okay, he hasn't done too much since his cheating accusations, because I don't think any major events have accepted him into their tournaments, but the little he has done is now in the article, thanks for your suggestions. :) ChessFiends (talk)


 * The bolded moves are hard to understand for people who don't understand algebraic notation. Could you add the algebraic notation template?
 * done


 * 95% of the "early life" section is about his early chess career.
 * This I can't really change, biographies can only report what articles say about the person, and in this case the only notable things to be verified are about his chess career.


 * Too few articles link here.
 * Added a link in the Zaven Andriasian article.

Overall, it's a well-organized article. I think it's ready to receive a GAN. Epicgenius(talk to me • see my contributions) 20:40, 18 April 2013 (UTC)