Talk:Fall Down (will.i.am song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Prism (talk · contribs) 19:19, 6 January 2014 (UTC)

Disambiguation links (per Dablinks)

 * ''Dablinks denotes one disambiguation link that needs correction.

External links (per Checklinks)

 * Checklinks does not denote any external link that needs correction.

Spot-checking to search for WP:OR

 * One problem with "It was released to Australian radio stations in July 2013 as the third single from the record" inline citation: it does not specifically appear that it was released in July. It kind of hints at that but it doesn't really specify. Reword.


 * Rest is alright.

Lead section

 * "and was certified gold in both countries" → ", being certified gold in both countries."

Critical reception

 * "felt like one of #willpower's "interminable 15 tracks were written in the studio moments before they were recorded." → "felt like one of #willpower's "interminable 15 tracks [that] were written in the studio [...]"


 * "delivered on "Ashtrays and Heartbreaks" Snoop Lion" → "delivered on Cyrus' collaboration with [nationality adjective] rapper Snoop Lion, "Ashtrays & Heartbreaks" (2013).


 * "Contact Music" is actually Contactmusic.com.


 * "which Brent Faulkner agreed was "utterly ridiculous"." → although he agrees with the lyrics comment, the "utterly ridiculous" comment was directed to the song itself and not to the actual lyrics. Could you make a separate sentence? Also, add 'from PopMatters' next to Faulkner.

Charts / Certifications

 * Merge the two sections, adding a template.

Comments

 * As usual, a good read and just a few comments to address. I will not have any problem passing this, I guess. 19:19, 6 January 2014 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your review, I appreciate it! WikiRedactor (talk) 22:24, 6 January 2014 (UTC)

Second read-through and result

 * I'm happy with the changes made, so, congratulations! prism   △  14:15, 7 January 2014 (UTC)