Talk:Fallen (Evanescence album)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jclemens (talk · contribs) 22:38, 8 January 2017 (UTC)

First Read Through

 * Lead
 * "Writing songs for Fallen started eight years prior; several of the songs that would feature on the album appeared on the band's earlier releases." Eight years prior to the release (1995, year the band formed) or eight years prior to signing with Wind Up (1993?). I suspect the former, please clarify.
 * "The album was certified seven times platinum by the Recording Industry Association of America and was certified abroad." Certified abroad is light on details, consider expanding that.
 * This was a copyeditor's decision. I'm willing to change it still, just asking for confirmation.  danny music editor  Speak up! 01:30, 9 January 2017 (UTC)

Overall, everything appears reasonably well written and very well cited. Just a couple of issues to fix or clarify... Jclemens (talk) 23:17, 8 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Song Information
 * "Lee realized that she was not, when she was "woken up"; the lyrics "wake me up inside".[12]" What does that mean?
 * Commercial performance
 * "and it has sold more than 7.6 million copies in the United States." Should that be 'as of (date)'?

All other concerns ✅.  danny music editor  Speak up! 01:30, 9 January 2017 (UTC)