Talk:Falling Skies season 1/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 03:44, 28 June 2012 (UTC)

Issues:


 * Lede: The lead needs to summarize every section in the article! Very small. Sorry if too harsh.
 * Lede: premiered → commencing airing
 * Lede: Add comma after "concluded" on first sentence.
 * Cast: Need references for recurring cast and other cast
 * Note: I don't know why. Can you explain this..?
 * Don't worry about it. TBrandley 21:31, 30 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Broadcast: Removed the table. Add it in sentence, Example: The series was picked up by the Super Channel in Canada, and debuted the series on SERIES PREMIERE DATE
 * Broadcast: Whole section needs references, please. Other than the 75 countries part.
 * Critical reception: Merge last paragraph sentence, with another paragraph in section. Too small, if not moved.
 * Ratings: FX series → FX drama series
 * Ratings: premiered on non-terrestrial channel → premiered on the non-terrestrial channel

As far as adding in references goes for the Broadcast section, I don't think it's necessary considering the reference mentions that it aired on Fox International Channels and TNT networks worldwide, and it is those FIC channels and TNT networks listed. However, I will leave it up to you. Let Me Eat Cake (talk) 17:00, 2 July 2012 (UTC)

On hold. TBrandley 03:44, 28 June 2012 (UTC)
 * I'm failing as no ref.s added to the Broadcast. Thus, it doesn't meet criteria. TBrandley 06:00, 28 July 2012 (UTC)