Talk:Falta Amor (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 10:45, 5 January 2022 (UTC)

Since this nom is nearly three months old, it is very appropriate to be wiped out currently! --K. Peake 10:45, 5 January 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Add the animated video for the solo version alongside the main and if you can't, place solely this one in external links
 * "A solo version of the song was" → "A solo version was" since no album or anything else is mentioned previously
 * "to re-record the track." → "to re-record the song."
 * "by Torres and Rengifo." → "by the former two."
 * "it is about a man" → "the song speaks of a man"
 * "The track received" → "The song received"
 * Mention that it was certified by the Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA)
 * "grieve a detached love" → "mourn a broken love" or something similar, to be less repetitive with the body
 * "To promote the song," → "To promote "Falta Amor","
 * "their own cover version" → "their own cover versions"

Background and release

 * "Ten days later" → "10 days later" per MOS:NUM
 * "mentioning it is set for release" → "mentioning it being set for release"
 * [1][2] appear to be out of order per them not corresponding with the order of info
 * "The album was released for" → "Fantasia was released for"
 * Remove "on the album" after second track because this is implied
 * Either remove PopSugar per WP:RSSM or replace with a reliable source that published the interview
 * "and hoped there would still be a chance" → "and hoped for a chance" to avoid direct quoting so much
 * "that he planned" → "that he had planned"
 * "Yatra told the magazine about collaborating" → "Yatra said about collaborating" because we already know this is for the magazine
 * "during an Instagram live:" → "on Instagram Live:" with the wikilink per MOS:LINK2SECT
 * "It marked the first collaboration" → ""Falta Amor" marked the first collaboration"
 * Remove comma after extended play

Music and lyrics

 * Audio sample looks good!
 * Remove wikilink on Latin pop
 * "while its production was" → "The production was" as a new sentence with this and the length since the current one is too long
 * Add a comma before which
 * "is influenced by" → "was influenced by"
 * "its emotion grows until" → "the emotion grows until"

Critical reception

 * These reviews should be ordered by what the critics focused on specifically, placing the stuff mentioned in the lead first probably
 * Remove wikilink on Rolling Stone
 * Italicise Clarín
 * "complimented its lyrics that" → "commented that the lyrics"
 * Too much is quoted from LatinPop Brasil, so reword parts
 * "on its own right, naming it a" → "in its own right, seeing a"
 * "in the lyrical plane". He continued to praise its" → "in the lyrical plane", continuing by praising its"
 * "were able to convey" → "managed to convey" per the translation of source
 * Too much is quoted from Univision, so reword parts

Accolades

 * Add after playlist "of the most streamed songs of the year."

Commercial performance

 * "with most top 20s" → "with the most top 20s"
 * Mention the date it was certified Latin platinum
 * "Besides the United States," → "Besides the US," per MOS:US

Music videos

 * Img looks good!
 * "An accompanying animated video for the solo version" → "An animated music video for the solo version"
 * "for the music video" → "for the collaboration's music video"
 * "that the visual would be released simultaneously with the song's release" → "that it would be released simultaneously with the song"
 * Again, either remove PopSugar quote per WP:RSSM or find a different source stating this
 * "who do a choreography," → "who perform a choreography,"
 * See earlier regarding these PopSugar quotes
 * "Juan Vicente from Los 40 called it" → "Vicente called the music video"

Live performances and appearances in media

 * Good

Track listing

 * Good

Credits and personnel

 * Good

Charts

 * Good

Certifications

 * Good

Release history

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; cruised through this one! --K. Peake 12:35, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank you so much for devoting your time on it. It is always an honor for me to have my nominated-articles reviewed by you. I fixed all the issues and changed or removed content based on PopSugar with replacing other references, I hope I haven't missed anything. If I had, please tell me to fix it. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 16:15, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ time has come; the only problem was that more of the PopSugar quoting needed to be paraphrased, though I reworded the earlier area for you! --K. Peake 08:59, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks a lot. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 09:20, 7 January 2022 (UTC)