Talk:Fanta Régina Nacro

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Musiclove44. Peer reviewers: Deseolopez.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 21:10, 16 January 2022 (UTC)

Untitled
Just some feedback, I wanted to first say that you are on the right track with your format of the page. This being said I can offer up some suggestions. First off, I suggest doing a little more background research on her person. What you have is very minimal and could definitely be expanded on with a little more research. If you're having trouble with research, the Carleton databases are an amazing place to start. Secondly, I noticed that a couple names appeared in red. What I suggest is instead of just surrounding the word with the typical Brackets, use one bracket and find a link that has another website with a description of that word. For example if i wanted to use the word IMDB and I could not find a wikipedia page on it i would use one bracket, find the url for IMDB's website and insert it, then a space between closing the bracket and the title, finishing with a bracket. For example it would look like this. [  URL (title of name)   ]     (Just excuse the spaces its just so it wouldn't create a hyperlink.) Lastly I just wanted to say that your references seem to be broken. If you're having trouble try finding a different source? All in all, you are on the right track!

Deseolopez — Preceding unsigned comment added by Deseolopez (talk • contribs) 02:26, 9 October 2015 (UTC)

Hello!

Before I provide feedback, I must say your page looks great, very professional. I can tell you put a lot of hard work, and research within your article and it definitely shows when reading it. There are however a few minor changes I would suggest to make your page a little more stronger and even more informative. First off I would like to suggest under your "Filmography" heading, you should put what Fanta Ragina did specifically on those projects, for instance director, editor, actor, etc. It may also be appropriate to make a table for this specific information, although not necessary, I personally find it more appealing. Another small error I may suggest is your sources are not properly linked to the website provided. As a reader I would like to be able to go to those sources in order to gather any other information. These are the only real errors I have noticed after reading your article, besides a few grammatical errors. I would like to congratulate you on providing a very professional Wikipedia page.

Excellent Job!

Maxblamauer (talk) 19:38, 6 November 2015 (UTC)Max Blamauer