Talk:Far from the Tree (film)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kaleeb18 (talk · contribs) 14:17, 2 April 2022 (UTC)

Well this makes me so sad. I reviewed the entire article, and while I had another tab open that I was looking at I came back to this one and the page refreshed so now I must redo the entire review :( ― Kaleeb18TalkCaleb 14:17, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
 * ...relatable Pamzeis (talk) 15:04, 2 April 2022 (UTC)

Prose
Well, that's it for my review. This is just my two cents, but if your looking for a DYK hook you could create one based off how the raccoons were originally going to be humans, cause that was interesting. ― Kaleeb18TalkCaleb 16:50, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
 * There is not much in the lead that talk about the producion section of the article
 * The infobox says the music was done by Nami Melumad, but I do not see that anywhere in the article
 * ...because there's nowhere else to put it? There is no coverage of her work on the short
 * Then shouldn’t there be a RS backing that up?
 * Well, the film's credits already serve as the WP:PRIMARY source for the information
 * I feel like the November 24, 2021, release date in the infobox should also have something with parenthesis around it saying something like theatrical release
 * Why, though...
 * Well, if I’m the reader I guess I would want to know what the second release was for. Or maybe I’m just dumb and should know the second release means theatrical.
 * Well, according to Film date, it's for the locations... and there's a discussion somewhere that says it should not include the location if it was the location in which the film was produced
 * Also is English really needed in the infobox, because the character do not even talk
 * I mean, Rotten Tomatoes lists the language as English
 * listening to the ocean waves in it – I would put ocean wave noises so it does not sound like there are ocean waves in the seashell
 * angrily scolds her for leaving, pointing out his scar – this sounds like the father is talking to the coyote
 * who acts much as she did – as much as?
 * research trip to Canon Beach. – I would add Canon Beach, Oregon.
 * Nourigat noted the abundance of raccoons in their natural habitat while on a research trip to Canon Beach. She immediately considered them as the short's main characters. – These two sentences can be combined
 * and story artist, respectively. – respectively is not needed
 * Needed to clarify one was a production supervisor and one was a story artist, not that they were both of these or something
 * Gotcha
 * Disney's Meander drawing system – If Disney's Meander refers to meander (art), I think meander should link to that. But idk if it is referring to that since I have no clue what Disney's Meander is
 * Don't think so, reading the linked article
 * simple accessory but ended – comma before but
 * ✅. Pamzeis (talk) 12:46, 12 April 2022 (UTC)
 * released alongside theatrical screenings Encanto – of Encanto
 * received positive response – is it supposed to be responses? you could also maybe say a positive response
 * Romper stated it – should be a that after stated unless the quotation marks were just forgotten
 * considering it have some of – to have
 * Maybe you can use an image of Cannon Beach in production so readers can see what it look likes compared to the short
 * ✅. Pamzeis (talk) 09:01, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅. Pamzeis (talk) 12:46, 12 April 2022 (UTC)
 * released alongside theatrical screenings Encanto – of Encanto
 * received positive response – is it supposed to be responses? you could also maybe say a positive response
 * Romper stated it – should be a that after stated unless the quotation marks were just forgotten
 * considering it have some of – to have
 * Maybe you can use an image of Cannon Beach in production so readers can see what it look likes compared to the short
 * ✅. Pamzeis (talk) 09:01, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
 * considering it have some of – to have
 * Maybe you can use an image of Cannon Beach in production so readers can see what it look likes compared to the short
 * ✅. Pamzeis (talk) 09:01, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅. Pamzeis (talk) 09:01, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
 * Alright I think the article is ready to pass the review. ― Kaleeb18TalkCaleb 13:08, 13 April 2022 (UTC)