Talk:Farn-Sasan/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Amitchell125 (talk · contribs) 16:48, 26 October 2020 (UTC)

Happy to review this article.

Lead section / infobox

 * ... the end of the Indo-Parthians. - this sounds as if they were all exterminated, and so needs to be amended.

Etymology

 * Link Indo-Parthian; Zoroastrian.
 * ... his name… - ‘... his name…’ sounds better imo.
 * Sorry, but I don't understand. --HistoryofIran (talk) 21:13, 28 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Oops, - ‘... the name…’ sounds better imo. Amitchell125 (talk) 07:07, 29 October 2020 (UTC)

Biography

 * ...the grandson of Sanabares, the King of Kings. - I would avoid linking inside the quote (this can easily be done because the terms to link already occur outside the quote).
 * ... which has the inscription… - if there is more than one coin, this should read ‘...which have the inscription…’,
 * The usage of fire altar on coinage was uncommon in Sakastan, and were only minted by Farn-Sasan. - this needs to be copy edited to something like ‘Farn-Sasan is the only king known to show a fire altar on coins originating from Sakastan.’.
 * Link Sakastan.

On hold
On hold until 5 November, regards Amitchell125 (talk) 21:00, 28 October 2020 (UTC)

Passing
Passing now. Please feel free to amend ‘... the name…’ if you're not happy. Regards, Amitchell125 (talk) 07:11, 29 October 2020 (UTC)