Talk:Fat Freddy's Drop/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: S Masters (talk) 08:23, 15 April 2010 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * References appear to be in order.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * Article appears to be stable.
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * Images comply to fair use requirements. Full stop missing on one of the captions.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Images comply to fair use requirements. Full stop missing on one of the captions.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Comments:
 * Names of songs and singles should be in quotation marks and not italics. Names of albums are in italics, see MOS:ITALICS.✅ Adabow  ( talk )  04:58, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
 * There are low-level punctuation issues. Avoid too many semi-colons. If possible, break into two sentences. Please try to get an editor who has not worked on this article before to give it a once over for such errors.✅, but it would be good if someone else could double-check it. Adabow  ( talk )  04:58, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Several sentences have three references or more. It is not desirable. If the references refer to different parts of a sentence, then put the reference exactly at the part of what it is referencing. Otherwise, choose the best reference for that statement and remove the rest.
 * Overlinking - Except for the lead, only wikify words on the first mention. There's no need to do it more than once unless the article is very long (this is not a long article). No need to wikify common words.
 * There's both "Top-40" and "top-40" - be consistent.✅ I replaced with "top 40" throughout article. Adabow ( talk )  04:58, 18 April 2010 (UTC)

Summary: There are some minor copy edit work and other issues outlined above that need to be rectified. I will allow up to seven days for these to be resolved before making any further decisions.

Final comments: Thank you for all the hard work done in improving this article. I am now confident that all the requirements for a Good Article have been met, and it can now be passed. Well done! -- S Masters (talk) 07:23, 24 April 2010 (UTC)