Talk:Fathers' rights movement in Australia

POV
The article is too self promotional, primarily based on press releases. No notable sources referenced nor any opposing views. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 203.116.29.210 (talk) 14:15, 26 June 2011 (UTC)

NPOV Dispute

This article is clearly ideologically biased. Much of it is written entirely in a one-sided, argument-presenting tone. There are many value claims about things being positive / negative or good /bad which are mere opinion. In particular in the bottom two paragraphs of the main description there is no evidence which actually supports the opinion-based claims made. In particular the claim of 'a broadening of the definition of child abuse to include non-abusive behaviour' is particularly inflammatory and confusing. Much of the article is based on using ideological websites and the opinions on them as 'evidence' and 'fact.'

I would reccomend deleting these bottom 2 paragraphs entirely which do not serve any useful descriptive function. I would reccomend re-writing the entry as a list describing the different groups and their ideas instead of as this writers account of the issues which have been dealt with. The references can then be seen or framed as documents of these movements (which they are) instead of evidence or proof of particular ideological positions. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Greenteame (talk • contribs) 03:34, 4 June 2012 (UTC)

It's written entirely like an essay not an encyclopedia article, but it does contain a lot of decent information, just needs a very thorough amount of work to change it, and then probably a good idea for the article to be locked or something.--Nelson21101805 (talk) 00:36, 31 January 2019 (UTC)

= Dads in Distress =
 * Dads in Distress is not a father's rights group it is a peer support group for separated parents — Preceding unsigned comment added by Boring user id (talk • contribs) 03:47, 10 June 2015 (UTC)

Making Up Stats
The article was mis-citing statistics - if you follow the provided link, it actually didn't even provide those numbers. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kmkaele (talk • contribs) 13:52, 6 August 2015 (UTC)

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