Talk:Fauda/Archive 1

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 25 December 2016
please change:

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 30 March 2017
Below, you can see my edit for the "Episodes" section of the page. I have added in the writer and director that previously was listed as "TBA." My source is from watching the episodes on Netflix. Jvanglish (talk) 20:23, 30 March 2017 (UTC)


 * Red information icon with gradient background.svg Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. You watching the episodes is not a reliable source. —MRD2014 📞 contribs 01:08, 31 March 2017 (UTC)

Type
I saw a typo. I wanted to fix the typo but the article is locked. ""Taufiq is survives the gun shot wound, but barely"" Should be: ""Taufiq survives the gun shot wound, but barely""

Also gunshot is one word. Don't use ""gun shot"". See the following URL: https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/gunshot


 * Fixed, thanks -  Galatz Talk  17:36, 9 June 2017 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 9 July 2017
Please put a warning on the plot that there are SPOILER. I just read the plot and didn't know there were spoilers and now I know the end without watching, I'm extremely dissapointed. 203.31.116.2 (talk) 23:22, 9 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Red information icon with gradient background.svg Not done: please establish a consensus for this alteration before using the template. jd22292 (Jalen D. Folf) (talk) 23:30, 9 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Per WP:TVPLOT Also note that Wikipedia's content disclaimer and guideline on spoilers is that all of an episode's important events should be outlined without censoring details considered spoilers, and without using disclaimers or warnings. Therefore it is presented correctly as is. -  Galatz Talk  14:43, 10 July 2017 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 25 September 2017
Hisham Sulliman, one of Fauda's actors now has an article, please add link to it on his credits on the Fauda article. Thanks! DoronWp (talk) 22:43, 25 September 2017 (UTC)
 * Yes check.svg Done Sparkling Pessimist   Scream at me!  22:53, 25 September 2017 (UTC)

Typo in "Nassrin Hamed" section
"in tact" should be "intact"

205.167.7.246 (talk) 08:21, 24 October 2017 (UTC)

Plot: Amar blowing up club
This part could be written in a slightly different way to be more clear on Amar's bombing role. To do this, I suggest the changes below in describing event. Perhaps close to the following:

"Amar, distraught over Bashir's death, volunteers to bomb a night club which Boaz frequents. This will ensure that the Israeli's get the message that it is revenge for the killing of her new husband (and Boaz's role). It was planned for Amar to first arm the bomb that's in her purse and then leave the club within the 3 minutes of its detonation. However, Amar decides to stay and die in the explosion."

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My thoughts for changes are because it clarifies that Amar volunteered to carry out retribution on her own (she wasn't coerced). She was inconsolable that her groom was killed at their wedding and the viewer soon gets the feeling that she volunteered because she had probably always planned to die in the explosion, but does not sharing this with fellow conspirators.

Regards, An AVID Fan! Rookeez (talk) 21:51, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Done -  Galatz Talk  11:19, 27 October 2017 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 8 November 2017
The artice of actor Tzachi Halevy is created. please add a link to the article on Fauda both on the "side credits" and in "Characters" paragraph. In addition, add a link to actor Hisham Sulliman on the "side credits". Thanks DoronWp (talk) 15:00, 8 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Yes check.svg Done DRAGON BOOSTER   ★  16:42, 8 November 2017 (UTC)

Thank you very much!--DoronWp (talk) 16:59, 8 November 2017 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 6 December 2017
The article of actor Yuval Segal is now created. Please add a link to his article on the 'Characters paragraph' and in the 'side credits'. DoronWp (talk) 18:29, 6 December 2017 (UTC)


 * Yes check.svg Done — MRD2014  Happy Holidays! 01:54, 7 December 2017 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 25 December 2017
Change "A few weeks prior to the airing of season 3, Fauda was renewed for a third season, to air in 2019." to "A few weeks prior to the airing of season 2, Fauda was renewed for a third season, to air in 2019."

(season 3, to season 2) Jahelistbro (talk) 22:09, 25 December 2017 (UTC)
 * Yes check.svg Done — -  Galatz Talk  22:32, 25 December 2017 (UTC)

A new season
hi, Galatz. The new season is on the air. Could you add this info? Corvus (talk) 12:51, 1 January 2018 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 1 January 2018
In the sentence "In the summer of 2016, Yes officially picked up season 2 of the show" from the first paragraph, the word yes should be written without a capital letter, also it should be linked to it's article yes. thanks!

'''Also there should be major changes in the article and the excessive restriction makes it much harder to update it. I ask from the users and admins in charge of this, to seriously consider reducing the restrictions.''' Thanks a lot! DoronWp (talk) 14:00, 1 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Yes check.svg Done, this article was protected in December, 2016 according to the terms of an Arbitration Committee decision, which you can see here. I'm sorry, but those restrictions are highly unlikely to be lifted any time soon due to the history of bad edits in this area.  You may request protection to be lowered but I wouldn't be optimistic.  On the other hand, if you stick around for a fairly short period and edit other articles in the meantime, you'll be able to correct this article yourself. Eggishorn (talk) (contrib) 16:17, 1 January 2018 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 6 January 2018
Plot, paragraph 3, “that the Israeli's” – delete the apostrophe. Israelis is merely plural here, and takes no apostrophe.

Plot, paragraph 3, “finds his girlfriend body.” Add an apostrophe and s to girlfriend – “his girlfriend’s body.” Characters, Main, Doron Kavillio, paragraph 1, “Doron having previously been credited with killing Abu Ahmad, rejoins” – add a comma after Doron. Characters, Main, Doron Kavillio, paragraph 1, “unit, 18 months later” – remove comma.

Characters, Main, Doron Kavillio, paragraph 3, “although it ultimately proved unsuccessful” – Change proved to proves, since the entire article is in present tense, not past.

I'd love to do more with this, as it needs a lot of comma work. But this suggestion format's kind of cumbersome. Jenniearcheo (talk) 20:56, 6 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Yellow check.svg Partly done: The punctuation was improved in the instances you mentioned. But I'm afraid that as far as punctuation is concerned with this article, fixing the errors is a lot like bailing out the ocean with a teaspoon. The tense of the passage you mentioned was not changed, for to make only one correction in tense would require all of them to be checked and changed.   Spintendo  ᔦᔭ   01:29, 7 January 2018 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 19 January 2018
You do not grow wine --- you grow the grapes and then make the wine. 62.219.163.73 (talk) 10:13, 19 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Yes check.svg Done  Spintendo  ᔦᔭ   13:06, 19 January 2018 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 22 March 2018
'Plot' section, paragraph 3: please change 'Amar' to 'Amal' (there are 3 references) Timo Metzemakers (talk) 22:23, 22 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Red information icon with gradient background.svg Not done for now: Do you have a source that reflects that this is the correct spelling of the name?  —   IVORK  Discuss 23:11, 22 March 2018 (UTC)
 * The name is spelled 'Amal' further down this very page, in 'Episodes'. See also the credits on IMDb. Timo Metzemakers (talk) 17:44, 24 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Red information icon with gradient background.svg Not done for now: Unfortunately IMDb is WP:USERGENERATED like Wikipedia so neither can be used as a reliable source, do you have any other sources ? —   IVORK  Discuss 22:08, 25 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Yes check.svg Done Netflix's episode descriptions confirm Amal. Eggishorn (talk) (contrib) 19:58, 26 March 2018 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 2 April 2018
Near the end of the description of Taufiq Hammed, please change "later revealed that they will use sarin nerve gas to detonated in the synagogue" to "later revealed that they will use sarin nerve gas to be detonated in a synagogue". Also, in the description of Walid Al Abed, please change "Taufiq views Walis like a son to him" to "Taufiq views Walid like a son to him". Fairguy (talk) 22:53, 2 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Red information icon with gradient background.svg Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. Eggishorn (talk) (contrib) 00:30, 3 April 2018 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 7 April 2018
I've been active on FRWP and also wikidata since 2015. I would like to add awards received by the Fauda TV serie in 2018. https://www.haaretz.com/israel-news/israeli-emmys -fauda-wins-best-tv-drama-shababnikim-best-comedy-1.5891352 LaMèreVeille (talk) 18:50, 7 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Ill happily do that, but I'm not sure where to add them and how. Could you maybe propose your change with the current code and the code for your proposed edit? L293D (☎ • ✎) 21:39, 7 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Could you add after ref. 7. In 2018, the show took 11 Ophir Awards, including best TV drama, best actor for Lior Raz and also best screenplay, casting, cinematography, recording, special effects and in other categories.  Ref: https://www.haaretz.com/israel-news/israeli-emmys -fauda-wins-best-tv-drama-shababnikim-best-comedy-1.5891352 --LaMèreVeille (talk) 08:40, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Red question icon with gradient background.svg Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. Eggishorn (talk) (contrib) 15:47, 18 April 2018 (UTC)
 * ✅ L293D (☎ • ✎) 13:27, 23 April 2018 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 27 May 2018
Change number of seasons from 1 to 2 and number of episodes from 12 to 24. 149.4.217.141 (talk) 23:47, 27 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Red information icon with gradient background.svg Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. Eggishorn (talk) (contrib) 01:05, 28 May 2018 (UTC)

Done. This is now available on Netflix and the episode count suggested agrees to the listing. -  Galatz Talk  17:45, 29 May 2018 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 8 June 2018
The name of the lead character should be Doron Kabilio not Kavillio; please change this. see report here: Cstapff (talk) 03:37, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Yes check.svg Done L293D (☎ • <b style="color:#000">✎</b>) 12:06, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Actually, where do you want me to change this? I can't find anywhere that says Kavillio is the main character. <b style="color:#060">L293D</b> (<b style="color:#000">☎</b> • <b style="color:#000">✎</b>) 12:12, 8 June 2018 (UTC)

Walis typo
Walis should be Walid Shushugah (talk) 03:54, 23 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Done. --johayek (talk) 12:18, 23 June 2018 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 20 June 2018
-It's written that the show won 11 Ophir awards, but Ophir are for cinema. Fauda won 11 Israeli TV Academy Awards. -Change the director of season 2, from Assaf Bernstein, to Rotem Shamir. -Change writer on Season 2 from Moshe zonder, to Amir Mann. - Please add episode summaries for season 2 Nadav23 (talk) 14:37, 20 June 2018 (UTC)


 * I did as requested apart from adding episode summaries. I am quite aware of that they are sort of available on IMDB, but I am not sure regarding the legal aspect. Does anybody want to clarify that? --johayek (talk) 16:36, 20 June 2018 (UTC)
 * IMDB is not a reliable source for that sort of thing, they'd need to be sourced from elsewhere. See Citing IMDb. Closing the edit request. <u style="text-decoration:none;font:1.1em/1em Arial Black;letter-spacing:-0.09em"><u style="text-decoration:none;color:#38a">Fish +<u style="text-decoration:none;color:#B44">Karate 09:03, 29 June 2018 (UTC)

click through
In the list of people in the show in the box, you should provide a click through for Boaz -- Tomer Kapon -- since he has an article, right? --2604:2000:E010:1100:E4E0:1C0:7B01:61F3 (talk) 05:12, 30 June 2018 (UTC)


 * Done. --johayek (talk) 07:00, 30 June 2018 (UTC)

Need new section on boycott call and controversy
Currently there is no suggestion of how much controversy this series has generated for its portrayal of Palestinans, like this piece in Haaretz https://www.haaretz.com/opinion/.premium-fauda-creators-think-arabs-are-stupid-1.5730664

And significantly, the BDS Movement has written to Netflix asking them to cancel the show: "Calling “Fauda” a medium for “racist propaganda for the Israeli occupation” and an “ostentation of aggression” against the Palestinians and their struggle for liberation, the BDS movement accused Netflix of being a partner in crime of the occupation." https://www.haaretz.com/israel-news/bds-urges-netflix-to-boycott-fauda-for-supporting-israeli-occupation-1.5957952 Ausrussell (talk) 17:58, 29 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Agree. I added this section in the French version https://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fauda and also the support from Hollywood of 50 entertainment industry executives.--LaMèreVeille (talk) 08:49, 8 April 2018 (UTC)

Thanks, LaMèreVeille. I think an English translation of your French would be good to use here, except for the inaccuracy that BDS is "illegale dans de nombreux pays" (illegal in many countries)... there are laws against financing of it but I'm unaware of any country making the movement itself illegal. And even if it were, not sure it would relevant. --Ausrussell (talk) 17:06, 17 September 2018 (UTC)
 * The mention illegale dans de nombreux pays was done under IP in 08/18. I've just deleted. --LaMèreVeille (talk) 21:56, 23 September 2018 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 26 October 2018
Episode 1.5, text "as he was support to provide information" should be "as he was supposed to provide information". Lester Kovac (talk) 10:11, 26 October 2018 (UTC)
 * Very well, done. --johayek (talk) 10:18, 26 October 2018 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 23 November 2018
Add Original Music COMPOSER credit. COMPOSER: Gilad Benamram 79.183.3.199 (talk) 08:19, 23 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Red information icon with gradient background.svg Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. DannyS712 (talk) 08:24, 23 November 2018 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 23 November 2018
add original music composer credit. COMPOSER: Gilad Benamram 79.183.3.199 (talk) 08:23, 23 November 2018 (UTC) 79.183.3.199 (talk) 08:23, 23 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Red information icon with gradient background.svg Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. DannyS712 (talk) 08:24, 23 November 2018 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 9 December 2018
change 'which Boaz frequents' to 'which Boaz, Doron's brother-in-law, and a member of his unit, frequents'

change 'While on a mission, Doron's brother-in-law, a member of his unit, Boaz' to 'While on a mission, Boaz' Agathpher (talk) 06:09, 9 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Yes check.svg Done – Jonesey95 (talk) 10:16, 9 December 2018 (UTC)

Locked page
Why is this page edit-locked for being "related" to the Arab-Israeli conflict? It's honestly pretty pathetic that you would lock a fictional TV series for something like that... VwM.Mwv (talk) 00:01, 8 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Wikipedia policy is anything even loosely related to it is under a stricter set of policies. You can read more about it in the header above. -  Galatz גאליץ שיחה Talk  14:19, 8 January 2019 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 9 February 2019
please add composer credit as such - Composer: Gilad Benamram, since he scored both seasons of the series. 79.183.66.103 (talk) 22:56, 9 February 2019 (UTC)
 * Yes check.svg Done – --johayek (talk) 23:38, 9 February 2019 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 9 February 2019
add composer credit: Gilad Benamram reliable source: https://www.imdb.com/title/tt4565380/fullcredits 79.183.66.103 (talk) 23:01, 9 February 2019 (UTC)
 * Yes check.svg Done – --johayek (talk) 23:38, 9 February 2019 (UTC)

Creating a new page with character list
Many first role character are missing: for example Yaakov Zada Daniel as Eli, substitute leader of the team; the whole Second season and episodi 1-3 of the first. --212.216.126.163 (talk) 07:11, 26 April 2019 (UTC)
 * I added a lot of the details while watching season 1, but I have not had a chance to watch season 2 yet. If you want to write information and post it here I can add it to the article for you. -  Galatz גאליץ שיחה Talk  13:38, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Thank you. As mentioned, Eli (portrait by Yaakov Zada Daniel, יעקב_זדה-דניאל), breafly appeared in episode 1x01, as kidnapper in the mosque, in the second season become a protagoinst. Now I am different ip, --79.55.53.122 (talk) 17:25, 18 May 2019 (UTC)

Fauda 3
New season is coming, as reported in https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=pxwiaaByRbo a week ago. Should the article report it? --79.18.48.57 (talk) 21:17, 2 January 2020 (UTC)

Criticism lacking in this article
The show is widely criticized - but none of this criticism appears in the article. Here are some sources that could be used: https://www.theguardian.com/tv-and-radio/2018/may/23/the-next-homeland-problems-with-fauda-israel-brutal-tv-hit https://www.theatlantic.com/international/archive/2018/06/watching-israeli-tvs-fauda-as-a-palestinian/561917/ https://www.haaretz.com/middle-east-news/.premium-fauda-isn-t-just-ignorant-dishonest-and-absurd-it-s-anti-palestinian-incitement-1.8788542 https://www.aljazeera.com/indepth/opinion/israel-propaganda-war-waged-tv-shows-200211150859809.html https://www.middleeasteye.net/opinion/fauda-turning-israels-victims-entertainment https://www.middleeasteye.net/discover/fauda-netflix-tv-show-review 157.52.6.39 (talk) 23:21, 28 April 2020 (UTC)

Two new sections
I noticed there isn't a section on the reaction of Israelis and Palestinians to the television series. I would highly recommend including a section summarizing how this television show is affecting the players of the Israeli-Palestinian conflict: https://www.pri.org/stories/2015-07-08/hit-tv-show-fauda-highlights-chaos-israeli-palestinian-divide

Additionally, there are storylines that occur within the episodes that are based on real life terror events. It would be wise to include those in another section. For example, an episode was dedicated to Iris Azulai because it was inspired by her murder: http://articles.latimes.com/1990-10-22/news/mn-2222_1_temple-mount

--Shainamarco (talk) 03:49, 28 January 2017 (UTC)

The Wikipedia page in Hebrew mentions that the show has been renewed for a 4th season - the English page does not mention this, so it would be good to update. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 92.23.198.57 (talk) 14:22, 29 April 2020 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 7 May 2020
Under “Distribution” it says that the show aired in Dec 2016 and references a Variety article as a source. It DID NOT air then and that’s NOT what the article is saying either. I’m not sure who read the article or wrote that sentence, but it’s wrong and is providing inaccurate information. The article says the series was PICKED UP by Netflix in November 2016. 70.31.35.76 (talk) 09:59, 7 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Red information icon with gradient background.svg Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. — Tartan357   ( Talk ) 10:15, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

That source is fine, I was highlighting that whoever wrote the section originally, misread the article, so someone should change the information since it’s wrong. All it has to say instead is that’s when it was picked up by Netflix

Lack of critical reception
Unlike most other media articles on Wikipedia rn, this article currently only got an awards section and not broader speaking critical reception which would have to include also negative responses towards issues such as it's dismissal of the lifes of people in a particular ethnicity & nationality (Palestinians). That is extremely biased for an article about a political show and needs to be corrected. arga — Preceding unsigned comment added by 176.127.3.78 (talk) 12:03, 8 May 2020 (UTC)

== Israel’s Fauda vs Turkey’s Ertugrul: In India, the Battle Between Two Hit TV Series Is More Than a Culture War ==

For the interested. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 13:14, 22 July 2020 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 2 April 2021
In the criticism section it is very biased and anti semitic and I would appreciate if you remove it there is enough hate in the world for Jews and the beautiful country of israel please remove it. Sam1967m16 (talk) 01:15, 2 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Red question icon with gradient background.svg Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. – Jonesey95 (talk) 03:12, 2 April 2021 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 24 May 2021
In the Main Characters section, two minor changes are needed:
 * Avihai - The full name of the character played by Boaz Konforty is Avihay Ben-Haim (as seen in Season 3, Episode 11/12). I would suggest renaming "Avihai" to "Avihai Ben-Haim".
 * Captain Gabi Ayub - Although Gaby is the character's first name, it appears that Captain Ayub is not the character's name, rather an alias. I would suggest rephrasing "Captain Gabi Ayub" to "Gabi (Captain Ayub)".
 * Red information icon with gradient background.svg Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. &#8213; Qwerfjkl  &#124; 𝕋𝔸𝕃𝕂 (please use&#32; on reply) 19:53, 24 May 2021 (UTC)
 * I've done the second one. You're probably right about the first, but I can't verify atm. ProcrastinatingReader (talk) 22:45, 24 May 2021 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 2 December 2021
The Summary of the character Nurit and the episode summary for Episode 4 of Season 1 both say Nurit shot and killed the female terrorist who tried to kill Nurit with a knife. If you look at the episode it is clear that the oman attacked her with a knife, Nurit threw her to the ground and simply pointd her gun at her as any law ebforcement officer would do after neutralizing alethal attack. The woman grabbed the knofe again and started to get up to attack again at which point a MALE colleague of Nurit's shot and apparently killed the female terrorist. It is incorrect to say Nurit shot her in the arm and then later shot her again and killed her. The woman was shot once and then by a male member of the team. Please just look at the episode yourselves to see it clearly. 2A02:14C:309:B100:8982:A29E:D136:6165 (talk) 15:42, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Red information icon with gradient background.svg Not done for now: please establish a consensus for this alteration before using the template. ScottishFinnishRadish (talk) 15:47, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Idan Amedi
Idan Amedi should be added to the Starring רותי ישראליי (talk) 06:27, 24 December 2021 (UTC)

Grammar/Style cleanup needed
I'm not sure if this was translated from another language, but certain sections have absolutely abysmal grammar. For example, the section on Walid says: "Walid as of season 1 he is 20 years old" and "Walid is a trusted member is Taufiq's team".

The section also misspells at least one name - Shirin - saying "Walid feels that he never knew what true love was until he met Shrin" Newms34 (talk) 03:45, 28 January 2022 (UTC)

Type
This article needs to be updated with Season 3! Well overdue. Season 4 is already airing!

https://www.imdb.com/title/tt4565380/episodes?season=4 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bogorad (talk • contribs) 09:19, 27 July 2022 (UTC)