Talk:Fear of missing out/Archives/2020

FOMO Suggestions
I will be providing suggestions as well as my overall look on the article. The lead has a brief description of two out of the three major sections, it does not introduce the pop culture section. Even so I think the lead is overly detailed as the second paragraph I believe does not need to be there and can be included later in the article. This article does not seem to be neutral and has become a persuasive article at some points. A lot of the sentences say that something has been "proven" with no actual proof in the article to back it up. Words such as "could be, can be '' are contradicting and for the most part it feels like it's trying to persuade the reader that FOMO depends on how a person uses social media and how it makes them susceptible to develop FOMO. A viewpoint that has been overrepresented is talking about the how on social media affecting FOMO. The smartphone image could be better captioned, and an additional photo could be used to make the article look more appealing. Angiexrm (talk) 03:24, 26 March 2020 (UTC)

FOMO DRAFT
The University of Glasgow in Scotland surveyed the mental health of 467 teens and the results found that they believed there is a sense of societal pressure to always be available.[1] It’s normal to be jealous as well as curious of what others may be doing, but it’s hard for those who have the fear of missing out to not let others' social life take over theirs.[2] FOMO causes lowered self-esteem and affects a person’s mindfulness.[3] It’s commonly misdiagnosed as a mental health disorder when actually the fear of missing out is an emotion. It’s mistaken as a mental health diagnosis because the fear of missing out creates fear and anxiety and can lead to more severe symptoms beyond FOMO.[4]Angiexrm (talk) 18:05, 1 April 2020 (UTC)

1. “The Psychology of FOMO: Fear of Missing Out.” King University Online. 2. Damico, Patrick. “How FOMO Impacts Mental Health.” Paradigm Malibu, 2 Aug. 2019. 3. Vitelli, Romeo. “The FoMo Health Factor.” Psychology Today, Sussex Publishers, 30 Nov. 2016. 4. “FOMO: It's Your Life You're Missing out On.” ScienceDaily, ScienceDaily, 30 Mar. 2016. Angiexrm (talk) 18:05, 1 April 2020 (UTC)

Peer Review for FOMO Draft
Peer Review: Great draft, I just have a few suggestions. It might be helpful to readers if the first two sentences were restructured in some way. Maybe you could say, "teens, and the results were believed to show a sense of societal pressure for teens to always be available." or something along that line. I suggest adding a comma in the second sentence after jealous and then after curious and then putting a period after doing. Then the next sentence could start with, "It's hard..." to create shorter sentences for an easier read. You gave good details and facts without giving any opinions that will help readers' overall understanding of the article. To me, everything looks good, besides the few structural changes if you choose to use them. I think you did a great job. Briannajade111 (talk) 19:15, 1 April 2020 (UTC)

FOMO Freeze
This is a new concept, which I feel is a common experience, but does not have an established name.

FOMO Freeze: The sensation that there are several new things to do or learn, but because of the fear of missing out (FOMO), a person will end up going into analysis paralysis, procrastinate, and then be filled with anxiety and guilt that they wasted time and did not attempt any of the options.

I understand that this is not an established term and as such does not have any sources to cite, but, feel it has merit and, being a newby, have no idea how to introduce it as a legitimate addition or possibly new, independent article? I hope this is the correct place to raise this discussion.
 * Hello! It could be possible you are referencing choice paralysis? I would recommend you looking into that :) Aflunters (talk) 04:17, 19 May 2020 (UTC)

Copy edit suggestions
Hello, I copy edited the first three sections of the article today, but was wondering if the second paragraph of the introduction and the third paragraph of the history heading are needed? I think it would be better to integrate these into the text of the effects section instead. Also, in my opinion the second section really should just be the history, as the definition of FOMO has already been established in the introduction. Maybe any further clarification of the definition should go in the intro instead? Please let me know your thoughts! Knutor89 (talk) 10:54, 28 May 2020 (UTC)

Citation does not cover "profitable investment"
From the article "FOMO is also defined as a fear of regret,[4] which may lead to concerns that one might miss an opportunity for social interaction, a novel experience or a profitable investment.[5]"

5: Shea, Michael (27 July 2015). "Living with FOMO". The Skinny. Retrieved 9 January 2016. https://www.theskinny.co.uk/students/lifestyle/living-with-fomo

The words money, investment, profit, sale, and deal do not appear anywhere in the article, and it never suggests that FOMO has anything to do with such matters. I suggest removal of the line "or a profitable investment", at least until it can be sourced properly. 207.161.212.113 (talk) 01:29, 27 December 2020 (UTC)