Talk:Federalist No. 24/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 19:53, 29 January 2024 (UTC)


 * Wikisource link to infobox.
 * "already did not exist under the law of the time" But they did exist in 2 state constitutions, so this statement shouldn't be so all-encompassing.
 * "peacetime. He says that it is merely an assertion that lacks an argument behind it." to "peacetime, calling it a mere assertion without strong justifications."
 * The summary should also include the reasons Hamilton prefers professional soldiers to militiamen and his discussion on the necessity of a navy and garrisons protecting it.
 * "had such a provision regarding standing armies" Unclear what this is referring to, just say "had a prohibition on raising a standing army" or similar instead.
 * "complacence in that" to "complacence because"?
 * "advocated garrisons in the western frontier and along the eastern coast" to "advocated for the establishment of garrisons along the western frontier and eastern coast"
 * Sources seem reliable and are properly formatted; will perform spot-checks later.
 * Spot-checks: All sources checked verified the claims made.
 * "Federalist Essays in Historic Newspapers". Library of Congress.
 * "Federalist Papers: Primary Documents in American History". Library of Congress.
 * Scott, Kyle (2013). The Federalist Papers: A Reader's Guide.
 * Epstein, David F. (2007). The Political Theory of The Federalist.
 * Nice work overall. AryKun (talk) 15:13, 6 February 2024 (UTC)
 * , I've made all suggested changes. Thebiguglyalien  ( talk ) 18:53, 6 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Passing now. AryKun (talk) 07:52, 10 February 2024 (UTC)