Talk:Federalist No. 6/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 11:21, 22 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Will do. AryKun (talk) 11:21, 22 August 2023 (UTC)


 * "The argument" maybe "This argument"?
 * "He also identifies...war-prone nations" Shouldn't the clause after the comma provide a contrast with the first clause here?
 * It doesn't use "but", "however", "although", etc
 * "Madison used a similar empiricist argument as Hamilton" maybe better as "Madison used an empiricist argument similar to Hamilton's"
 * Plot summary seems accurate from a reading of the original document.
 * Images are properly licensed and used.
 * References are reliable and properly formatted.
 * Spot-checks:
 * "Federalist Essays in Historic Newspapers". Library of Congress. Verifies all claims made.
 * Millican, Edward (2014). One United People: The Federalist Papers and the National Idea. University Press of Kentucky. pp. 79–80. Verifies all claims made.
 * "Federalist Papers: Primary Documents in American History". Library of Congress. Verifies all claims made.
 * That's all I have.

, all changes made except the one noted above. Thebiguglyalien ( talk ) 17:29, 22 August 2023 (UTC)