Talk:Federated architecture

This is an exceptionally complicated article. I am a systems application developer and I had trouble sorting out the meaning of the term from the article. I propose the emphasis on "enterprise" is misleading. From what I understand, federated software design are decentralized. They work together. Twitter DM is not a federated design. Email is a federated design. "Homelab" groups describe open source software solutions as "federated". — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mr.trippple (talk • contribs) 18:45, 5 June 2020 (UTC)

Please don't delete the article i need some time for editing - thank you

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As reviewing administrator, I think this is not exclusively promotional, so I am not deleting it. Suggestions for editing:  DGG ( talk ) 00:53, 6 November 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Describe it, don't praise it
 * 2) Most adjectives are better omitted
 * 3) Try for conciseness. Some of the sentences seem empty verbiage
 * 4) Find references providing substantial coverage from 3rd party independent published reliable sources, print or online, but not blogs or press releases, or material derived from press releases.  Try to find sources that cite it as important--independent sources-- not ones from the originators of the concept.