Talk:Feelings (Zonke song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 20:43, 20 October 2016 (UTC)

Will do this tomorrow JAGUAR   20:43, 20 October 2016 (UTC)


 * ""Feelings" is a jazz song that is accompanied by a combination of African drums and beats" - link Rhythm in Sub-Saharan Africa
 * "She remarked that it is important for her to handle the production on her music" - of her music?
 * "unlike the majority of Zonke's catalog" - catalogue (South African spelling)
 * Channel O is linked twice in the beginning of the Reception section. On the second instance it is italicised, so does it need to be italicised or not?
 * "However, "Kulungile Baba" by Sifiso Ncwane instead won the award" - However, "Kulungile Baba" by Sifiso Ncwane won the award instead,
 * "During the singer's own Give and Take Live Tour" - 'the singer' seems redundant here, I'd just replace it with "her"
 * No dead links
 * No dab links

This is a neat and compact article. I couldn't find anything wrong with the sources and it the prose is well written, so once all of the above are clarified then this should be good to go. JAGUAR  16:57, 21 October 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks so much for your review! I have made all the changes you suggested above! Regards, Carbrera (talk) 21:29, 21 October 2016 (UTC).
 * Thanks! Promoted.  JAGUAR   10:36, 22 October 2016 (UTC)