Talk:Feline immunodeficiency virus evolution

Looking good! I like how you already have your table of contents and some of your references integrated. Advevol (talk) 17:53, 6 March 2021 (UTC)

You've done a nice job with this. It is informative and well-referenced. I would go ahead and make the reviewers suggested changes, fix typos, and finish making your final improvements Advevol (talk) 21:20, 17 April 2021 (UTC)

I added some comments on how the article could be improved, and I made a peer review page that highlights the article's strengths and how it could be better.Athanasius22 (talk) 21:02, 1 April 2021 (UTC)

This is looking like a really good Wikipedia article! It is well organized and the lead section is well organized. The only thing I really noticed that could be improved is "Additionally, lentiviruses are also highly endemic in Africa infecting not only felids, but also primates, and ungulate species which suggests to the origins of all lentiviruses, but further research is needed". The article flowed well but this sentence inhibited that flow a little bit due to maybe being a bit too complex and lengthy. Possibly breaking it into two sentences or simplifying it a bit would help it flow more fluidly. Also, I'm not sure if the footnote number should be inside or outside the period at the end of a sentence (if it is like how you did it, I need to correct my own article formatting) Overall, you have a very in depth article and it is very informative!Joeadunlap (talk) 15:40, 6 April 2021 (UTC)

Downcase
When you move this to mainspace, please remember to downcase the name, as is standard in WP article titles (e.g. Feline leukemia virus). Thus, please move it to Feline immunodeficiency virus evolution. Cheers -- Elmidae (talk · contribs) 15:17, 8 April 2021 (UTC)