Talk:Feodor Machnow

Rewrite needed for grammar and clarity?
I'm not 100% sure I can do this rewrite competently, but it seems like this article could really benefit from a rewrite to improve English grammar/usage and overall clarity of the text. I almost suspect this of being a Babelfish or similar translation. Seanette (talk) 01:04, 30 November 2010 (UTC)