Talk:Fernando Cajías/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 03:36, 1 January 2023 (UTC)

Not much to do. 7-day hold to. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 03:51, 1 January 2023 (UTC)

Lead

 * exercise minor public functions There has to be a more idiomatic way to say this.
 * Changed to continued to hold minor public posts. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 04:56, 1 January 2023 (UTC)

Early life

 * Shuffle punctuation a bit: Cajías was the eldest of ten siblings: six sisters (Dora, Beatriz, Lupe, Magdalena, Martha Teresa, and Isabel) and three brothers (Francisco, Huáscar, and Pedro), a substantial...
 * ✅, although used em dashes rather than parenthesis. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 04:58, 1 January 2023 (UTC)

Academic work

 * In his last public function Maybe "post" instead of "function"
 * Changed to In his final public post Krisgabwoosh (talk) 04:58, 1 January 2023 (UTC)

Personal life

 * Cajías' was Stray possessive should be removed.
 * ✅ Krisgabwoosh (talk) 04:58, 1 January 2023 (UTC)

Sourcing and spot checks
Earwig mostly catches work titles from the official biography.


 * 2: Mentions Fernando as Huáscar's eldest son; also has brief bios of his siblings. ✅
 * 9: Pulls from a list of titles held on his official site (ABOUTSELF). ✅
 * 11: AGF on these register-to-access sources. ✅
 * 19: Loss in his 2004 vice rectoral campaign. ✅
 * 23: Biographical information on Naya Ponce, paired with #10 for marriage. ✅
 * I had an additional question regarding sources. As it wasn't a super notable event, I couldn't find any online news sources reporting on Cajías's withdrawal as a candidate for rector. I ended up using this post from the Facebook account of the front that was sponsoring his candidacy. Is that valid as a source? I understand that Twitter posts are occasionally acceptable; is it the same for Facebook? Krisgabwoosh (talk) 07:46, 1 January 2023 (UTC)


 * @Krisgabwoosh The relevant policy is WP:ABOUTSELF, and I would accept that. Sammi Brie  (she/her • t • c) 00:55, 2 January 2023 (UTC)