Talk:Fernando Vásquez/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 06:27, 20 August 2022 (UTC)

Almost there. 7-day hold to. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 07:04, 20 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Will pass. Pinging again to see the numeral comment.  Sammi Brie  (she/her • t • c) 07:32, 20 August 2022 (UTC)

Copy changes

 * Should "Minister of Mining and Metallurgy" be capitalized in the first sentence?
 * I tend to follow the style of not capitalizing titles if it comes after a person’s name (i.e. Joe Biden served as vice president of the United States). Krisgabwoosh (talk) 07:18, 20 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Ah, OK. That makes sense.


 * 2019 to 202, and as director missing a digit; drop the comma (User:Sammi Brie/Commas in sentences)
 * ✅ Krisgabwoosh (talk) 07:18, 20 August 2022 (UTC)


 * Don't italicize "Radio Fides Potosí" (radio station names don't get italics)
 * ✅ Krisgabwoosh (talk) 07:18, 20 August 2022 (UTC)


 * The minister of mining must publicly apologize". Full sentence — period in quote. MOS:INOROUT
 * ✅ Krisgabwoosh (talk) 07:18, 20 August 2022 (UTC)


 * ...remove the authority; one she complied with. "Remove the authority" sounds un-idiomatic; that should not be a semicolon; the trailing "with" is kind of meh here
 * Changed to: "remove the minister. The president complied, and on 30 May, "


 * Write "22" as a number
 * ✅. Out of curiosity, what is Wikipedia's general style for when to and not to write out numbers vs. using numerals? Krisgabwoosh (talk) 07:18, 20 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Ah, turns out both are acceptable: MOS:NUMERAL. Integers greater than nine expressible in one or two words may be expressed either in numerals or in words (16 or sixteen, 84 or eighty-four, 200 or two hundred).

Other items

 * Sources check out, and all references are archived.
 * Earwig turns up no issues.
 * Images need alt text.
 * ✅ Krisgabwoosh (talk) 07:18, 20 August 2022 (UTC)