Talk:Festivali i Këngës 58/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 06:35, 7 January 2021 (UTC)

A lot of music articles, so I'll help cut them down by reviewing this! --K. Peake 06:35, 7 January 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Target Radio Televizioni Shqiptar to RTSH
 * Shouldn't the 67 votes that the song received be listed in the infobox?
 * Target Radio Televizioni Shqiptar to RTSH
 * "on 19 and 20 December," → "on 19 and 20 December, respectively,"
 * The contest being cancelled due to the COVID-19 pandemic is not sourced anywhere in the body
 * The lead is currently too short; add some information in the appropriate areas, such as the opening act and especially the final acts

Format

 * Retitle to Background and format
 * Target Radio Televizioni Shqiptar to RTSH
 * "for determining their" → "for determining Albania's" or you could keep the former wording if you give a proper introduction to RTSH
 * "on 19 and 20 December," → "on 19 and 20 December, respectively,"

Interval acts

 * "The interval act in the first semi-final featured Italian singer Mahmood, performing" → "The interval act featured Italian singer Mahmood, who performed"
 * "The interval act in the second semi-final included" → "The second semi-final's interval act included" to not start two consecutive sentences with the same three words
 * "Agim Krajka and Lindita Theodhori with the song" → "Agim Krajka and Lindita Theodhori performed" with the wikilink
 * Write out that the grand final performances were mashups

Contestants

 * "a provisory list of twenty artists" → "a provisory list of 20 artists" per MOS:NUM
 * "two semi-finals of the contest," → "two semi-finals of the Festivali i Këngës 2019,"
 * "between May and September." → "between May and September 2019."
 * Add the appropriate source(s) to the table

Semi-final 1

 * "The first semi-final took place" → "The first semi-final of the competition took place"
 * "Ten contestants participated in" → "10 contestants participated in"
 * Merge the above sentence with the last one of this para
 * [13][12] should be put in numerical order
 * See MOS:TABLECAPTION and add the appropriate source(s)

Semi-final 2

 * "The second semi-final took place" → "The second semi-final of the Festivali i Këngës 2019 took place"
 * Remove target on CET
 * "Ten contestants participated in" → "10 contestants participated in"
 * See MOS:TABLECAPTION and add the appropriate source(s)

Final

 * "The grand final took place" → "The grand final of the competition took place"
 * Remove target on CET
 * "The contestants qualified for" → "The contestants that qualified for"
 * "Prior to the end of the show," → "Prior to the end of it,"
 * "mixed reactions followed with" → "mixed reactions followed, with"
 * "criticising the competition itself" the source does not mention this, only about it receiving criticism because of the alleged arranged voting
 * See MOS:TABLECAPTION

Final comments and verdict

 * until the issues are fixed, though I did notice that the refs looked a bit messy here than in your other articles. --K. Peake 15:26, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
 * I hope you're well . I responded to your comments and done everything.--Lorik17 (talk) 20:05, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
 * I am doing well here in the UK thanks despite the harsh lockdown, hope things are going fine for you in Germany. I did some copy editing briefly, cutting the lead to one para because it is too short to fit properly into two and also remove an excess language parameter. However, you still need to fix the MOS:QWQ issues with refs; to be specific, this is where speech marks have been inserted in the titles manually and I've pointed all of the instances out earlier. --K. Peake 21:21, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks for asking, I'am also doing well given the strange circumstances. Would you do me a favor and specifically explain to me the issues with the MOS:QWQ in the context to the references here, Im unfortunately struggeling to understand that.--Lorik17 (talk) 21:54, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
 * , well I got it now, haha!--Lorik17 (talk) 22:06, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Glad to know things are going well for you, it was weird because I saw the notification for your first comment before the other and initially thought you needed help you fix the issues! ✅ now all issues have successfully been dealt with. --K. Peake 06:51, 8 January 2021 (UTC)
 * , yes i had my difficulties but I solved the issue. Thanks again for the successful review. :)--Lorik17 (talk) 12:26, 8 January 2021 (UTC)