Talk:Festivali i Këngës 59/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 14:24, 10 January 2021 (UTC)

I will start reviewing this today after you have made all of the suggested changes to the other article I reviewed; feel free to tell me if the number of reviews is too much at once and you will not be able to respond to this one by tomorrow. --K. Peake 14:24, 10 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your fast reviews, that's of course fine for me.--Lorik17 (talk) 14:45, 10 January 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Target Radio Televizioni Shqiptar to RTSH
 * "on 21 and 22 December, and" → "on 21 and 22 December, respectively, and"
 * "the competition did not used" → "the competition did not use"
 * "as traditionally at the" → "in the traditional location of the"
 * "in an open-air location at the Sheshi Italia." maybe reword this slightly while keeping the same meaning, as it is a bit too repetitive of earlier in this para?
 * "of the contest will therefore" → "of the contest and will therefore"
 * "in the Eurovision Song Contest 2021 Rotterdam," → "for the Eurovision Song Contest 2021 in Rotterdam,"

Background and format

 * "was organised by RTSH" → "was organised by Radio Televizioni Shqiptar (RTSH)" with the target
 * "on 21 and 22 December, and" → "on 21 and 22 December, respectively, and"
 * "The three shows were" → "The three live shows were"
 * "and Albanian host Blendi Salaj." → "and host Blendi Salaj." since "Albanian" being the nationality used earlier in the sentence makes it obvious he is too

Impact of the COVID-19 pandemic

 * "was not held as traditionally at" → "was not held per tradition at"
 * Target open-air to Open-air concert

Contestants

 * "in the competition between" → "in Festivali i Këngës between"
 * "of twenty-six artists and songs" → "of 26 artists and songs" per MOS:NUM
 * "On 16 November," → "On 16 November 2020,"
 * Artist(s) → Artist, as none of the instances feature more than one
 * Composer(s) → Composer, per above

Semi-final 1

 * "the official studio version of their entries." → "the official studio versions of their respective entries." or something similar since otherwise it sounds like they performed a studio version of all their entries together
 * "the selected eighteen songs to" → "the selected 18 songs to"
 * Artist(s) → Artist, per earlier comment

Semi-final 2

 * "acoustic version of their entries." → "acoustic versions of their respective entries." with the target, per earlier comment
 * Add the appropriate source(s) to the table
 * Artist(s) → Artist, per earlier comment

Final

 * "Before the end of the show," → "Before the end of the competition,"
 * "as the winner of the competition" → "as the winner" since these two suggestions being implemented helps make things less wordy
 * Remove wikilink on Eurovision Song Contest 2021
 * Add the appropriate source(s) to the table
 * Artist(s) → Artist, per earlier comment

Broadcasters

 * Target live streams to Live streaming
 * "through their official YouTube channel" → "of Festivali i Këngës through their official YouTube channel"
 * See MOS:TABLECAPTION
 * Broadcaster(s) → Broadcaster, per earlier comment
 * Centre the refs

Final comments and verdict

 * until you have fixed everything; the article was on the verge of edit warring but that got resolved weeks ago. --K. Peake 17:06, 10 January 2021 (UTC)
 * I responded to your comments. The edit warning was related to the final results which in the end were fake.--Lorik17 (talk) 17:43, 10 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Yeah I recognised that since the resolving summary did mention it as well as solving the issues, which is why I marked the article as stable. ✅ now, but don't change this from future to GA class because the Eurovision Song Contest that this was held for still has yet to happen. --K. Peake 17:56, 10 January 2021 (UTC)
 * thanks for the reminder and the successful review. Best regards!--Lorik17 (talk) 18:00, 10 January 2021 (UTC)