Talk:Fetch the Bolt Cutters/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: 100cellsman (talk · contribs) 06:45, 14 September 2020 (UTC)

Arguably the best album of 2020. I'll look article over, Thus far, I'm optimistic glimpsing at it. 웃 O  O  06:45, 14 September 2020 (UTC)


 * Great! Let me know if there's any changes I could make. Jimmio78 (talk) 05:40, 25 September 2020 (UTC)

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 * Just so you know, the copyvio detector gave the Vulture article about the album's songs an 81% rating of its violation confidence. Perhaps you could give its quotations tighter paraphrasing.


 * "On March 9, 2020, she revealed that she had finished recording" I suggest changing to "By March, she finished recording the album."


 * "Apple's characteristic piano-playing is still evident" This is rather vague if readers new to her music are taken into consideration.


 * "Apple's long-time bassist Sebastian Steinberg compared the album to Apple's 2012 song "Hot Knife", describing it as "very raw and unslick"." Not a major issue, but this statement feels trivial to me since it's someone she knows personally who compared the album with one song.


 * I noticed that the article had a couple brief edit wars recently. But hopefully they've subsided.

, aside from these suggestions, I think the article is in such good shape that I feel like I did a half-assed job reviewing! It just took longer than I thought because I've been sidetracked. 웃 O  O  09:06, 4 October 2020 (UTC)


 * I think I've addressed all of these. I cut down a few of the quotes from the Vulture article. For the "On March 9, 2020, she revealed that she had finished recording" quote, I agree that the specific date is unnecccessary, but I left in the wording of her having announced the album's completion as I think this is a bit clearer. Hopefully everything else is fixed! Thanks so much. Jimmio78 (talk) 22:52, 4 October 2020 (UTC)