Talk:Fieldin Culbreth/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Go Phightins! (talk · contribs) 21:19, 22 April 2013 (UTC)

I have made a handful of edits to this page, so barring any objection, I will review it anyway. I will review and then ask for a second opinion to ensure neutrality. Go  Phightins  !  21:19, 22 April 2013 (UTC)

A few miscellaneous notes:
 * In the umpiring career section, give something quantitative about "did not take long" to get to the big leagues...one month or one year, or one decade? ✅
 * How is the Mariners game score relevant? ✅ I removed it.
 * Cite his 2013 crew. ✅
 * Isn't "umpired" usually the verb we associate with umps rather than "officiated"? Perhaps, but using "umpired" over and over again might be a little redundant. I think "officiated" is fine.
 * There's a problem with the balance in this article. Most of the "notable games" and "incidents" are from the last five or six years, and hardly any are from pre-2005, yet he has been an umpire since 1993. We need some due weight to each part of his career. ✅, maybe. Take a look and see what you think.
 * References look generally OK. I will spot check when all other issues are addressed. Thanks. Go   Phightins  !  01:12, 24 April 2013 (UTC)
 * All right; all of the refs seem to check out. Passing. Go   Phightins  !  19:15, 7 May 2013 (UTC)