Talk:Fierce Light

Neutrality of the introduction
The introduction seems to be to written from the perspective of one who is advocating the ideas portrayed in the film, as in the following phrases:


 * "... Spiritual Activism that is catalyzing the planet."
 * "... to reveal what is possible when individuals, friends and strangers, faced with a world in crisis, rise to their absolute best."

I think it should be possible to describe the film's content, and even it's social impact, in more neutral language. Davnor (talk) 22:16, 4 March 2010 (UTC)

Ideas for expanding the article
I have just finished watching and was moved enough to see the article as a point of reference to the issues & actions & the people involved, to inform just as wikipedia was intended (in my mind anyway ;)). I have started by expanding the list of interviewees & added: Others featured include Michael Beckwith, Sera Beak,, ..

I think a list format with brief bio-data would serve best.

I will update in increments. Please don't wait with your improvements for me to find the time to continue-dive in please (or perhaps stay NEUTRAL & not write :) & may the Dharma punks et al get to you as 'they' have me in Peru.

Un abrazo DadaNeem (talk) 19:41, 17 September 2011 (UTC)